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Reviews for A Merciless Affection

Vocalion 2005.05.24 - 10:54PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
I love the whole story woven into canon that you've created. Very well written.

Aestel 2005.05.24 - 09:26PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
Hmm... My bet is Morgaine's from The Mists of Avalon... but I don't know about Lukas.

Excellent chapter, and I really like Snape in this one, especially his willingness to tell Sarah she got herself into the mess. It's probably not what she wanted to hear, but it made me chuckle.

Thanks a lot for the special shout out... I'll try to update again as soon as opossible, but I'm stuck on a late paper, so my next update probably won't come until the end of this week.

Author's Response: She would be sort of appropriate, wouldn't she? But wrong Morgaine. If no one can guess, I'll tell next chapter. Good luck with your paper!


Aestel 2005.05.24 - 09:26PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
Hmm... My bet is Morgaine's from The Mists of Avalon... but I don't know about Lukas.

Excellent chapter, and I really like Snape in this one, especially his willingness to tell Sarah she got herself into the mess. It's probably not what she wanted to hear, but it made me chuckle.

Thanks a lot for the special shout out... I'll try to update again as soon as opossible, but I'm stuck on a late paper, so my next update probably won't come until the end of this week.


Osiodhachain 2005.05.24 - 09:17PM 3: My Instructions Should Be Clear Signed
Crikey! I am loving this story. Sarah Darkglass is utterly believable as a character. I'm fascinated by this attraction that seems to have sprung up almost of its own accord between her and Snape. Okay, I'll just move on to the next chapter then.

Owlbait 2005.05.24 - 07:53PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
The Slytherin way of life has to be tough. I don't think Snape would find it quite as much fun as he thinks to turn Sarah into one. I'd have thought she'd be in the high-energy stage of preggersness by now, by 5 months I'd left the sleepies behind and was nesting something fierce. Interesting that Snape is asking her where her loyalties lie, but isn't saying himself. I also loved the bit where Snape admitted he'd tried to find out if Umbridge was working for Voldemort. :*)

Author's Response: I was prone to the sleepies all through pregnancy, although I did feel better mid-term. Sarah is under a lot of pressure. She'd probably feel exhausted even if she *wasn't* pregnant.

Mariana 2005.05.24 - 07:36PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
Another lovely chapter. Beautifully played. I almost feel as if the two of them are dancing to the same song, and trying to reconcile their steps with each other. I wonder how Snape's going to respond when Sarah starts showing a little more. Most men's panic levels increase to the high frequency range. Snape even *more* tetchy than usual is not something I'd like to be dealing with. Ever!

Oktober Black 2005.05.24 - 07:24PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
Interesting developments. How preggers is Sarah at this point?

Author's Response: About five months.

Gina Potter 2005.05.24 - 06:58PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
Snape is a dark man. In times like this I feel sorry for Sarah, because it's like she's all alone; he doesn't give enough support for her in these hard times.

Trickie Woo 2005.05.24 - 05:43PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
A comment I for got to add, I've always thought Dumbldore had a lot of Slytherin in him. I wonder if the Sorting Hat had a problem deciding when he came as a first year. The thoughts about Dumbledore in her head describe him as a consummate Slytherin.

Author's Response: Dumbledore strikes me as someone who probably had to learn his Slytherin traits over the course of long and sad experience. I find that the older I get, the more Slytherin I become.

mouse 2005.05.24 - 05:26PM 22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror Signed
I do like trying to figure out how Sarah and Severus's story is going to intertwine with the canon story - still enjoying this all very much! Keep on updating! :D

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