Reviews for A Merciless Affection
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.19 - 08:30PM |
41: You Deceived Me |
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:'( Waaaaaaah! ((((((((((((((((((sarah)))))))))))))))))))))). Very sad and powerful chapter! PLEASE make things better! |
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.19 - 05:39PM |
38: All the Crème de la Crème |
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Ooooooooo! Sarah is getting so good at the wheeling and dealing. Severus should be so proud of her! I can't take the pressure! Somebody needs to figure out where she is and DO something! |
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.19 - 05:10PM |
37: Order Your Fine Horses Now |
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Eeeeeeeeek! Your Bellatrix is very chilling. I can't wait to read more! Heck, if Sarah could contact the Dark Lord I bet even he would disagree with this little charade... And give Franklin the crucio he so richly deserves.
Author's Response: Bella is such an interesting character. There appear to be many more male than female DEs, and it's interesting to consider what would drive a woman into that company. Fortunately for Sarah, Franklin and Bella (and Lucius) are about to mess up bigtime. |
H20girl |
2005.12.18 - 09:08PM |
45: Gossip's Worth Its Weight in Gold |
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Good to have them back together. Now, is he going to make her keep her promise about her dorm room or is he going to get distracted? And how would Sarah take (or mistake) that request? Hmmm...
Author's Response: I definitely still have the dorm room in mind. Right now I'm stuck over engineering the post-battle conversation with Dumbledore. And yes, it is very good to have them back together again. It was as nerve-wracking for me as for anyone, I think! |
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.17 - 01:01AM |
29: Here in Hell, the Blood Runs Deeper |
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Another great chapter! When will she admit she loves him too? She seems harder and colder than he does sometimes in that respect. Years of hiding feelings at such a young age...
Author's Response: She is slower than he is to face her feelings, strangely enough. And yes, it is because of her past. |
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.15 - 10:27PM |
22: Look at Your Face in the Mirror |
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I am really enjoying your story. Your Snape matches the one in my mind. I do believe he IS able to care on some level, but emotionally stunted and used to being hated and reviled. I especially loved in a past chapter where just wanting to be touched was a very big deal. For a man with his background and rep, that was a very big step on his part, to be able to ask for that, IMHO. I hope they both continue to grow up a bit together!
Author's Response: I sometimes have trouble remembering, as I'm writing, that they are not the same age, because she is older than her years and he, in many ways, is younger than his. They are, I think, good for each other, despite all their struggles. |
naughtygirl3000 |
2005.12.14 - 03:08PM |
45: Gossip's Worth Its Weight in Gold |
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This is brilliant!! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it. Holiday busyness and a tricky conversation in the chapter after next have slowed me down. |
Nikara |
2005.12.14 - 10:43AM |
45: Gossip's Worth Its Weight in Gold |
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I love this story. I'm completely grateful for it because I'm taking finals all week and this has been a much needed distraction. Although it has taken me 2 days to read!
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I hope your finals went well, Nikara! Yes, it's gotten rather long. Thanks for reading! (And especially for reviewing!) |
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.10 - 02:03AM |
12: Think of It, a Secret Engagement |
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WOW! What a shocker. It's two hours past bedtime and I can't stop. Curse you! He He He.
Author's Response: This is the kind of review that gives me a feeling of power power POWER hmmm power. Thanks! :~) |
LucretiaDelphi |
2005.12.10 - 01:57AM |
11: Spare a Thought for Me |
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Ha Ha good job on the Rickman reference. I just rented that to watch AGAIN tomorrow. Get out of my Head! Although my Snape had a crookeder more hoked nose, he has THAT voice. Squeeeeeeeeeeee!
Author's Response: I love putting in Rickman references. And I agree that while my Snape looks a bit different than Rickman, that voice is *awfully* nice. :~) |
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