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Reviews for A Merciless Affection

Anastasia Witchling 2005.10.19 - 01:23PM 41: You Deceived Me Signed
Like a lot of men, Severus tends to say the wrong thing at the wrong time. Sarah needed some comfort and he could have said something that was closer to his heart instead of his motives. Because she did feel alone and now he has made it worse by leaving without explaining his hurt feelings- but this IS Snape we are talking about.... True, as I am slowing learning from my boyfriend that men and women ARE entirely different in the way that we think. Men are either really blunt or they choose to say nothing when cornered. Both of which I hate, to say the least.

Author's Response: That is SO true, Anastasia! Men are very bad at knowing what to say, and as you say, they usually either say the wrong thing or refuse to say anything. Thus far, Sarah has been a sufficiently independent soul to not let it bother her. But now that she's so vulnerable, she really needed him to get it right. And so, of course, he didn't.

I'm glad to see someone recognizing that Severus' feelings were badly hurt by this argument as well. Of course, Sarah's not even considering *that*.

Mary Ella 2005.10.19 - 12:06PM 41: You Deceived Me Signed
Oh my! Well, you definately made the situation true to life. Those were truly terrible things Snape said, and I only hope that the clearer heads will make revelations of their own. I love Miriam! I can't wait to see what she has to say!

Author's Response: Thanks, Mary Ella! I always love it when I manage to pull off true-to-life. :~)

That was an ugly argument, wasn't it? And it won't be as easy to patch up as most of the stresses they've been through so far. Miriam is definitely oil on the water, though. For everyone around her, I think.

Melvacaea 2005.10.19 - 11:30AM 41: You Deceived Me Signed
But...but... *sniffle* That's so evil. I never liked Alicia or Angelina. Give me the willies, they did. *wrinkles nose* Verity...*whinges like a petulant child* Make it better, Ver. Pleeeeeeaaase? (As you can see, the angst got to me. And I'm sick! I need happiness, not Prozac!) -Mel

Author's Response: Awwww, sorry, Mel! I wish this could get better quickly. I really do. *gives you chicken soup*

AnnieS 2005.10.19 - 10:26AM 41: You Deceived Me Signed
Wow, this was so good. I felt like crying too. You've really brought Sarah to life and the call on the half blood status of Snape before the sixth book came out was brilliant. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks, AnnieS! My thoughts on Snape's background were actually largely inspired by Red Hen's essay about Snape's family background, which also was out long before HBP. So I can't take all the credit for that--I just took an idea that I thought seemed reasonable and expanded on it. Hopefully the next update will come in sooner.

Fleurke 2005.10.19 - 09:56AM 41: You Deceived Me Signed
Another Chappie! *Cheers & Gives cookie* I'm glad Miriam will return, she's kind, and Sarah will listen to her. You're right that he shouldn't have told her the truth, she just wasn't ready for it. But perhaps one is never ready for a truth like that. Can't wait to see how this continues!

Author's Response: Oooo, cookies! Thanks, Fleurke. :~)

avada kedavra 2005.10.19 - 12:51AM 40: But We Daren't Refuse... Signed
Awesome chapter! "If he had been in the room, she would have thrown something at him." That made me smile.

Author's Response: Thanks, avada kedavra! Now, what will happen when he *is* in the same room?

silversky 2005.10.18 - 08:27AM 40: But We Daren't Refuse... Signed
Gads! How are you going to get her out of this? I'm hanging on my seat for the next chapter!

Author's Response: So am I, silversky! I uploaded the next chapter *last* Wednesday. Apparently the admins have been hit with r/l and the queues are moving reeeeally sloooowly.

Oktober Black 2005.10.17 - 08:14PM 40: But We Daren't Refuse... Signed
Interesting developments.

Author's Response: I hope that's a good interesting instead of a bad interesting.... :~)

AdultSwimGeek 2005.10.15 - 06:28PM 14: Turn Around and Face Your Fate Signed
Hey! I had no idea you live in Topeka(or that you went to washburn) I live in Lawrence! Weird!...anyway, i really like this story, I think it's the best I've read. Hehe...My name is Sarah too and I found the "Sarah Snape" part kinda funny but then i felt bad because this isn't a lauphing matter!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Sarah! I love seeing a new reader's review. And one from the great state of Kansas is even better! Sadly, I don't live in Kansas anymore. *cries* I'm in exile in Iowa.

lozzy 2005.10.14 - 05:30AM 40: But We Daren't Refuse... Signed
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response: Welcome, lozzy! You could, if my next chapter would get posted. I uploaded it Wednesday night....

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