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| ,00, | 2004.03.06 - 03:52AM | 38: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 28, Continued | Anonymous |
| Excellent story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And there's more a-comin'! | |||
| ShagsTheDustmop | 2004.03.06 - 02:15AM | 38: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 28, Continued | Anonymous |
| Now THAT is a cliffie! Don't give in, Emily! Just say no, beat Lucius off with the pimp cane, and go shag Snape again! *waits patiently for Chapter 29.* | |||
| ishie | 2004.03.06 - 01:59AM | 38: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 28, Continued | Anonymous |
| You know, I don't think you could possibly write fast enough to keep me satisfied. :) Great chapter, as usual, although I find my hands itching to shake a little sense into Emily. For someone who seems to be rather intelligent, she is missing a lot of rather important information. Although, who wouldn't be seduced by the lemony goodness of Lucius Malfoy into ignoring the little voice in the back of one's head? Evil, evil cliffhanger. That rat bastard! I can only imagine the havoc he would wreak with her true name... Dare I hope that she'll come to her senses in time? | |||
| AngelTears88 | 2004.03.04 - 03:24PM | 36: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 27, Continued | Anonymous |
| I love this story, I really do. I come and check up on it, every day to see if you have updated. It's so exciting... I want to read on an on! Please keep posting... :) Author's Response: Thank you, love! Yes, I fully intend to keep on working on this story until it's finished. I usually update on Mondays (or in a pinch, Tuesdays.) All I can say is, stay tuned! | |||
| Rumours | 2004.02.28 - 09:27AM | 36: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 27, Continued | Anonymous |
| Mmmmmmmmmmmm. DAMN STRAIGHT!!! Congratulations on another BRILLIANT, rivetting chapter. Now get off those exquisitely delicious laurels, and let us know what happens next!!! ;-) Fine. You can have one day off. Maximum. Remember - I'll be watching!! *snigs* | |||
| Rumours | 2004.02.28 - 09:23AM | 35: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 27 | Anonymous |
| Like Sev, I feel oddly non-compelled to give you an invoice for my time with Emily ... although in my case, it's for time not worked BECAUSE I CAN'T TEAR MYSELF AWAY FROM KEC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
You rawk, woman. :)
Now to read the next part ... Author's Response: Ooooh, Ruthie my love, you and your exclamation points and heaving bosoms certainly know how to make a gal feel loved! Smooches to ya! | |||
| Hawaii | 2004.02.05 - 12:54PM | 32: Part Second: The Hart Rampant: Chapter 25, Continued | Anonymous |
| I know I have sort of reviewed this story in another 'realm' but it needs (deserves!) a review here. This story is in my top ten list of best HP stories of all time. Brilliantly written, with stunning detail and characters so delicious you can practically taste them coming coming off the screen. And not to mention that I will never, ever, look at a phone booth the same again thanks to this tale. Super fic. I can't wait for another chapter to appears!!! | |||
| Zagzagael | 2004.01.29 - 11:51PM | 3: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Ah, Guernica - this first chapter is such a triumph of your style, your unique wit, your ability to thrum your incredibly true-to-life erotic sensibilities and your astonishing skill at creating a scene so powerfully real that this reader is left gasping every single time it's read - and I read it often. This chapter is one of the finest, if not the finest, bits of writing I have ever read in the fandom and I appluad you heartily for your work. It is a dance, it is an aria, it is a poem, a masterful painting, it is just a sheer delight for every faculty of sensation. I LOVE THIS PIECE OF PROSE! Sigh...the red call box scene...
Be well. Author's Response: Thank you very much! | |||
| Synchestra Duende (aka Madelynx) | 2004.01.24 - 10:36PM | 18: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 16 | Anonymous |
| From Erised Posted 06/01/03
Chapters 16 and 17
Just finished reading your updates.
CHAPTER 16 IS QUITE POSSIBLY MY MOST FAVORITE. I thoroughly enjoyed Severus' recount of his initial
encounter with "Ms. Spelled-with-a-Y". A nice glimpse
into Snape's psychology and the range of vunerable
emotions he went through that day - from attraction to
lust and enjoyment of female companionship and then on
to shame and anger over feeling used, tricked and
abandoned.
Forgive me, but Chptr 17 was short - you tease!
Whatever is Mr. Lascivious Lucius going to do with
this dark haired/eyes faire call girl? Certainly not
something nice I would think. And I really do wish
that Snape and Emily would be on the road to recovery
in dealing with their little dirty secret that they
share.
Appreciated your hats-off to "Legend". One of my
favorite and visually memorable 80s fantasy films.
Ridley Scott would have been able to make a much
better version a decade later. I've drawn a lot of
artwork from that film and happen to have a link on my
site for it. I was chuckling to myself while reading
your little incorporation into the story.
I can't wait for more chapter - yes, please!
~Mys Duende
Author's Response: Thank you! Ch. 16 was one of my favorite chapters to write - glad you enjoyed it! And no, we haven't seen the last of the dark-haired call girl. All I can say is, stay tuned! | |||
| Synchestra Duende (aka Madelynx) | 2004.01.24 - 10:33PM | 17: Part First: The Hart Assurgent: Chapter 15 | Anonymous |
| Review from Erised 05/22/03
I greatly enjoyed your fic and look forward to more.
The beginning of the fic was an unusual setting for a SS/OC type fic. Infact, I was a little puzzled by what Emily had done to Severus' potions bag. You had written it as if to confuse the reader in addition to baffling and annoying Snape - who apparently seemed to be so distracted by a woman whom he assumed was a Muggle - that (even) _he_ was capably careless enough to misplace his luggage. I like that Severus was entirely out of his realm -- so when this seemingly ordinary attractive woman asked him to have tea with her -- he was almost stumped, did a double take in his mind - almost didn't know how to respond -- unsure of how to switch gears and actually allow himself to be amiable to an invite and go on a date with a woman. Just something that Snape never thinks possible of himself. But because they were complete strangers, it allowed him to wipe his slate clean and pretend he was a normal sociable man. Snape almost seemed out of character in the tea chat scene -- and no doubt even *he* thought he was acting out of his usual antisocial mode. I like how clueless he was about placing a phone call -- once again assuming the Muggle could help him out. I enjoyed Emily's directness with him when she called him on his obvious attraction. The impulsive all-over-each-other phone booth scene was certainly hot and memorable. And then a vulnerable, abandoned Snape as he wonders where she vanished to -- meekly calling out to her in askance of her name: "Miss spelled with a Y?" How out of control and out of the comfort zone Snape had just been and then dumped by a woman -- and then much later on in the story feeling used for her own purposes. It was so perfectly in character for Snape to pretend not to have 'known' her once they introduced professionally at Hogwarts. Doning his usual mask and playing the usual comfortable Scrooge he does best for everyone.
I especially enjoyed the scene where Snape chastised Emily in front of the staff regarding class dungbomb tricks. That was very witty humorous writing.
You have a gift for writing Lucius. Everytime I read his dialog I swear I could hear Jason Isaac's distinct snooty accent all along the way - completely dead on. Even I was charmed by Lucius and his generosity and artificial saccharine affection for Emily. You make it so we *want* to like him and trust him. I especially like the evening scene at the Malfoy's bash - where Emily spies the men gathered around the fireplace -- looking suspiciously serious and nefarious as Death Eaters want to do in the dancing firelight. And the near rape she dealt with. It's as if the night time brings out the worst in these people. And I can not wait to continue reading if only to see Emily eventually come to realize that Lucius has quite a dark side to him she has _had_ the pleasure to not yet meet. Oh, and I like that Lucius calls Snape "Severus, my old man." It's as if he's telling him that's all he is capable of being - ever.
The tension between Snape and Emily could a be a bit stronger at the end of your first part - but still I can see why Snape is holding back - that large ego is still holding a grudge over having been used as equally by a woman as a man might (such as himself) use a woman. The part where he stings her attempts at trying to make amends all coming down to his final admission as to how he felt she played him a fool was incredibly smart dialog. I can not wait to see how things come together between the two in the second half.
I think your writing is rather class act. It has sort of a Regency romance flavor to it. Again, I can't recall enjoying the Lucius scenes *almost* as much as reading an all Snape fic. Both characters are equally interesting and I can not wait for the plot to thicken. I thank you for putting your talent to such eloquent use, and I'm waiting and hoping you'll produce more chapters (and soon.)
Oh, by the way.. I hope you don't mind - I've reviewed and added your fic to my website under "latest reads"
Dark Potions
www.firefancies.com/darkpotions/splash.htm
~Mys Duende
Author's Response: Thanks, my dear! I really appreciate the inclusion on your site! | |||
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