Reviews for The Knight Errant Chronicles
anemone |
2005.01.31 - 07:29PM |
69: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 39 |
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Hi Guernica--I'm new to reading fanfic, & I gotta say, I was blown away by your work. I love your rendering of Snape's past; it's now hard for me to imagine it being otherwise. Also, your inventiveness in creating the Faerie world & Emily, and even more so your subtle, smooth weaving of it into the OTF world, is really masterful. I must say that Emily remains a mystery to me--it was hard for me to understand how, as a proud warrior, she could allow herself to go back to Lucius's arms as a spy. Nevertheless, I'm mesmerized. Keep it up! |
Nymphadora |
2005.01.31 - 03:26PM |
69: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 39 |
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Ooh! yet another cliffie! I swear you are going to kill me with these one day! I also laughed hysterically at all you alley names (I am slow, I hadn't worked the ones you'd said before out yet). I loved the Cat and Emily interaction and her re-reading the letter *evil grin*. And I am really bouncey now in anticipation of the next part of this chapter! I love you, mydear, hope you know that! |
jh_wheatley |
2005.01.30 - 12:59AM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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Love it, love it, love it!!! Can't wait for emily to fiannly get a clue and admit she's crazy for Severus. Oh how the sparks will fly! Looking forward to the next installment! |
WiccaRowan |
2005.01.28 - 05:32PM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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My favourite line this chapter: "She took a Cruciatus Curse from the Dark Lord himself - and you couldn't even pick up a mop?" I'm so glad Snape's potion kicked ass, I was worrying about poor Emily and couldn't check up on her cos I'd been so busy at work (I'm sure she understands). I'm surprised Snape uses his own tears though - I'd have thought he'd just wipe them off the benches after his classes! |
Maela |
2005.01.26 - 01:45PM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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Love it! Hooray! Emily now knows that Severus has been thinking about her even if it is in a round-a-bout way. So how is Emily going to proceed with the Death Eaters. Surely she won't go back?! Update soon! :) |
josephine_violet |
2005.01.25 - 11:38PM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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Guernica, this story continues to be completely engrossing - I can't get enough!
The narrative is so rich and every detail is beautifully realized.
Emily is such a wonder heroine - an excellent companion for the Potions Master.
Please just keep writing and writing - no need to actually complete such a
wonderful story!
Why am I limited to rating this a mere "10"? |
Linnet |
2005.01.25 - 07:57PM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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Okay, that was a I-just-finished-the-chapter-so-am-still-dancing-in-excitement review. I really am much more coherent than that, I swear... usually. You've got me scrambling for words. Like -- amazing. And wonderful. And whoa. Adored the tactile sensations you've given us, the visceral descriptions of the pain, of the wound, of how Emily must have looked when she came through the door. You've pulled at the heart strings with mention of Severus' tears. Thank you so very much for your story so far! *hugs* Keep up the great job! ... ... .... Um, you did say that there'd be some, ah, romantic envolvement forthcoming? *beams hopefully*
Author's Response: Thanks, gorjuss, glad all of that came across! I was trying to indicate just how beaten down Emily felt if she was ready to start bawling on SNAPE's shoulder, of all people. And yes, there will be some romantic involvement forthcoming - look for that relationship to start heating up as soon as...dare I say it...oh why not, you've all come this far...Ch. 39. I kid you not ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks, gorjuss, glad all of that came across! I was trying to indicate just how beaten down Emily felt if she was ready to start bawling on SNAPE's shoulder, of all people. And yes, there will be some romantic involvement forthcoming - look for that relationship to start heating up as soon as...dare I say it...oh why not, you've all come this far...Ch. 39. I kid you not ;-) |
Linnet |
2005.01.25 - 07:30PM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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WOOHOO!! *glomps onto you with a huge hug and dances madly abuot the room* YES! Yes yes yesyesyesyes!! MAgnificent! *stops dead still and stares pleadingly* Sex now? Puhleeeeeeze?
Author's Response: Trust me, beautiful, those two will come back to each other, and when they do, they'll be like satyrs on Viagra. And it'll be sooner than you think ;-) |
Odd Doll |
2005.01.25 - 02:47PM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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Just beautiful. I enjoyed the interaction between Emily and Catherine. It is good to see the characters through others' eyes.
Marianne
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it. Catherine Orson is one of my favorite supporting players in this story, and I have a lot of fun writing her. She'll definitely be around in future chapters :-D |
Lesen |
2005.01.25 - 10:50AM |
68: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 38, Concluded |
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Except I forgot to say how much I liked the discussion of Em's prior crushes. It was a nice note, and it's funny that she gets her penchant for brooding men from her dad. Okay, that came out wrong, but you know what I mean.
Author's Response: No worries, babe, I know exactly what you mean. It's funny how we tend to look for the qualities that we love about our parents in our lovers and spouses, isn't it? ;-) |
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