Reviews for The Knight Errant Chronicles
Nymphadora |
2005.03.22 - 12:46PM |
76: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 42 |
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I so adore your writing. Thank you. I love thet way those to work togethr, they are just utterly perfect for one another.
Author's Response: Thanks, sweetheart! And you're right, Sev and Emily are kind of uniquely suited to one another in ways that they're both still discovering. I hope it makes for an exciting read! |
Maela |
2005.03.22 - 12:30AM |
76: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 42 |
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Hooray! It was well worth the wait. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And the second half of Ch. 42 WILL go up next Monday, I promise :-) |
sonof1000skinks |
2005.03.21 - 11:02PM |
76: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 42 |
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Another masterful turn! And such inspiring eroticism. I think I'm going to shag my sweety later just out of competitive envy.
Author's Response: Thanks, babe, I *hope* my sexier scenes inspire folks thus! And what a lucky sweetie you must have ;-) |
Ember |
2005.03.21 - 09:50PM |
76: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 42 |
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It has been worth the wait for this chapter. BRAVO!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you very much! I appreciate everyone's patience with the hiatus. |
Greyfalcon |
2005.03.21 - 06:36PM |
76: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 42 |
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Finally after three weeks the wait for another chapter is over!! I have become quit addicted to your work and it was with great pleasure to read yet another fine chapter to this story
Author's Response: Fantastic, I'm glad it wasn't too excruciating. But there WILL be another chapter going up on Monday, promise. |
phoenix |
2005.03.21 - 05:45PM |
76: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 42 |
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Excellent job. I love the description of Snape Hall and can see Sev's mom giving him lessons about the various wings. I also like the way you portray him embarrassed by the current state of the Hall...Of course the last scene was a great way to end. Of course, I know this can't last forever as both have managed to get themselves on Lucius' bad side and this is making it worse....As much as I love to see the two of them happy, I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop....Well worth the long wait. :) |
gloredhel28 |
2005.03.15 - 03:24PM |
75: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 41, Continued |
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Beautiful, but oh, two weeks with no update? How shall I go on? *weeps*
Author's Response: Oh noooo! I'm sorry love, I just had an insanely huge work project come up within the last couple of weeks, and it's taking up all my time. I'm *pretty sure* I'll have a long update done this coming Monday. However, if you're jonesing for another hit of snarky Byronic hero romance, I have a new story based on the "Constantine" movie and "Hellblazer" comics up at Chaos: http://chaos.sycophanthex.com/viewuser.php?uid=44 |
Novinha |
2005.03.15 - 04:29AM |
1: Lexicon |
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I believe this is going to be one of my favourite chapters (talking about chapter 31) - the whole absinthe episode, from the kissing to the argument was wonderful, both the idea and the way it was written. It was in character, interesting, gripping - very gripping - and just appropriately drmatic. Greetings from Poland, Novinha
Author's Response: Cześć! I’m very glad you liked the chapter! As far as the Severus and Emily interaction, I do very much like to give the readers both sides of what’s going on as far as her point of view as well as his. I don’t feel too devoted to the creative writing convention of only giving one character’s point of view in a story, because, darn it, both Severus and Emily are just too real to me to be neglected. I’ll try to give equal time to both of them thoroughout the rest of the fic, and hope that their points of view feel familiar to all of the readers. Anyway, dziękuję to you for such a nice review from Poland! |
Wysiwyg |
2005.03.10 - 05:50PM |
73: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 40, Continued |
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Yay, finally! I can see why Emily was a bit cautious at first though after what happened to Dorien, especially as Lucius has tried to kill Severus twice now! I actually didn't notice the link thing right away, but I am a bit slow I'm afraid - Lucius has absolutely no right to be jealous, at least Jayson wasn't married with a kid (I don't think). Lol, I love the way they both the other was ignoring them! Why were they spending so much time together then (bah...clueless, the both of them). Oh yeah, this line made me laugh out loud, "I've overheard them saying, "Do you think I've got nothing better to do in Potions class than listen to Snape?"" That pesky Ronald Weasley methinks. I have to say you sure know how to play with a gal's emotions. Just as I'm getting all excited about the hot date, that Rosier bitch shows up and realises Em's out of hospital! Ack!!! Nice of Emily to skank Lucius for a change though, Lord knows he deserves it.
The whole chapter after the bit where Emily finally reads the letter I just couldn't stop smiling, seriously I beamed like an idiot especially the bits where they're getting ready for the evening and both worrying far too much about it!
It's brilliant the way they're both terrified of the dinner and wanna get straight into bed! |
Wysiwyg |
2005.03.10 - 12:28PM |
71: Part Third: The Hart Subvertant, Chapter 39, Concluded |
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Heeey chapter 39, it's good, but it's really damn frustrating! First off, Catherine is so damn cool and a muggle and she can see what's going on between Snape and Emily and I really hope she gets in the Order, they do need a decent medic. Good work in making the story tie in with canon (a reason for Molly, Ron and Ginny to be at Grimmauld Place over the summer). I love your Alley names and OMG how adorable are the squeeing house elves on the moving staircases?!
Ok, now to the frustrating bits - I fucking HATE Lucius! Every time we have more news of him I hate him even more! What a fucking wanker, why is he trying to kill Severus? Argh! Snape is such a badass with all the stuff he's learned from Emily, and to think, cruddy Lucie hasn't even got a true name (the loser). Ugh, and as for his letter - don't feel the need to apologise. For what? Him leaving her bleeding and semi concoius on the floor without even sparing a glance? Grrr (Can you tell I hate Malfoy Snr.?) Other cool bits were Tonks (I can totally see why she and Em would get on, they both rock) who agrees with me on Lucius being a prick. Snape just happening to walk in as Emily is showing Molly her iron burn was very funny. Em admiting she likes Sev, then that she has a crush on him, and then that she loves him (aw!) DD being the all-knowing wily old busy body as ever (and don't we just love him for it!) OK, I can't write any more 'cos I have to know what happens next, sorry! As always, hope I didn't babble. Cheers. x |
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