Reviews for Highly Improbable
| phoenix |
2005.03.26 - 02:35AM |
18: This Time the Dream's On Me |
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Severus had better hope that she never finds out what he did. Of course, she's muggle so it's improbable. Now that he's been mostly smacked over the head, I look forward to seeing where it goes next.
Author's Response: Thank you, phoenix, for your very nice reviews. It would be improbable if she were to find out -
highly improbable! :) |
| phoenix |
2005.03.26 - 01:48AM |
16: Let's Call The Whole Thing Off! |
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| Oh, poor Severus. I feel so sorry for him having to deal with Clancy. Shame they can't remember that tidbit of the future. I enjoyed the comedy and didn't even think to nitpick the apparation bit. Perhaps he's too tired now to apparate without danger of splinching? |
| phoenix |
2005.03.26 - 12:43AM |
14: Almost Like Being In Love |
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Wha???? Okay, now I definitley need to read the next chapter.
Back to the rest of the story, I love it. You have done a great job capturing the banter between the two of them. I love how you have them at each other's throats. Well, mostly him at hers. :) |
| phoenix |
2005.03.25 - 11:27PM |
13: Let Me Entertain You! |
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| Oh my, what a great chapter. I love that they ended up in Wales with Charlotte Church. And I knew taht Snape was somewhate despicable, but that's just hilarious. You're playing this characters off each other wonderfully, love it. |
| phoenix |
2005.03.25 - 11:17PM |
12: The Bumpy Road To Love |
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| OMG, this chapter just kept getting better and better. He really is going to kill her now, isn't? It was bad enough she got them lost, but to vomit on him, lose his wand and vanish his clothes. Absolutely priceless. Thank you for making me laugh. |
| phoenix |
2005.03.25 - 10:55PM |
11: How To Handle A Woman |
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| Oh my, what a wonderful chapter. I love her falling prey to firewhiskey and then running into the one person she didn't want to....Snape will never let her live that down, will he?...Oh her ill timed sneeze, loved it, absolutely loved it. He's going to kill her slowly, isn't he? |
| phoenix |
2005.03.25 - 10:36PM |
9: Be Careful, It's My Heart |
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| Very nicely done. I love the poetry. And Snape's idea of flattery was priceless. No wonder he's alone. And of course his reaction to her flattery was just what I expected from the ever closed off Snape. I'm sure Albus will continue to conspire to get them together. |
| phoenix |
2005.03.25 - 10:01PM |
8: My Shining Hour |
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| Ah, the icy facade is finally fading a bit. Very nicely done on this and I knew Dumbledore was not finished. I love the jabs at Lockhart, he's such a fop. |
| phoenix |
2005.03.25 - 09:13PM |
7: The Object Of My Affection? |
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| "Is it because I'm an American, or because I'm a Muggle?" "Both are equally low. Take your choice." This has to be my favorite line from the chapter. I love how you have Dumbledore up to his usual meddling. Naturally Severus would be aware of this, but something tells me he'll still fall for it |
| Trickie Woo |
2005.03.25 - 06:04PM |
28: Everything Happens to Me |
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| Good, they are back together, for a while at least. Now I ca got to work on that anagram. Do you remember the 'Morse' where we finally found out what his first mane was? He gave the woman an anagram and told her to figure it out. |
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