Reviews for The Magic of Old
Floris |
2004.10.19 - 08:10AM |
14: Muggle Safari |
Anonymous |
What Severus said was *horrible* but what Ellie did was worse. Basically they both should have thought before they spoke but Ellie went a step further by actually taking action and sending the letter. I would expect her to be more responsible with herself considering she's pregnant. Looking after her baby's safety is more important than getting back at Snape. (And there's no way she should be having sex with a Death Eater when she's pregnant.) As far as keeping herself calm for the baby's sake consider this: my sister-in-law lost both of her parents in a car accident when she was 5 months pregnant. She told me she just put off dealing with it until after she gave birth because she was terrified she would lose the baby if she let it sink in. So it is possible.
Author's Response: They are both very irrational at times and have very nasty tempers. Ellie is definitely not thinking clearly and Severus seems more concerned with his spy duties than with the wellfare of his wife and child. The things he asks of her are absolutely ridiculous. A bit of foreshadowing* his requests will come back to haunt him*. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.10.19 - 08:07AM |
1: The Boy at My Left |
Anonymous |
Nice foundation that you have laid. I find the story very intrigueing.
Author's Response: Thank you. There is a very long way to go with this story. I do hope you will stay with it. |
Floris |
2004.10.15 - 03:23PM |
12: The Other Man |
Anonymous |
Oh Severus, you idiot! What a thing to say. I guess it's just a clear example of what a life of constant spying, lying and moral compromise can do to a person that he even *thinks* of it. She should have just told him she'd pretend she didn't hear it. A freebie if you will.
Author's Response: Who is worse, Severus for suggesting it or Ellie for agreeing to it? Only time will tell. |
shimmer |
2004.10.15 - 11:17AM |
12: The Other Man |
Anonymous |
wow this is definitely an interesting chapter, sort of like a turning point in the relationship. do write on. i'm dying to see what happens!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command. The next two chapters are in queue and should pop up on the site sometime today.
Liz |
stellagirlsx6 |
2004.10.14 - 10:11PM |
12: The Other Man |
Signed |
Very interesting plot. I really like all the twists and turns you put in and I'm amazed at how well you write some of the more gruesome details, I sincerly hope that it comes from being a student of human nature.
Author's Response: I see that you received my question.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I am well versed in the school of life (and a bit of college as well). I hope that you stay tuned for more. I promise to keep reviewing for you.
Thanks,
Liz
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LariLee |
2004.10.14 - 05:34AM |
12: The Other Man |
Anonymous |
Geez, this is a difficult chapter. I think this could cause her to lose the baby. Is the possible information worth it? Nah, Malfoy should get stuffed. Or Severus should show up unexpectedly. Yeah, that'd be good!
~Lisa
Author's Response: Well...I had a very difficult time wring the next few chapters. I was very, very torn with the different possibilities. This could be considered the fork in the road because from here on out I actully wrote two different versions of the story. Can you believe I was actully angry with myself at some points?
Stay tuned...and thank you so much for reviewing...Liz |
Floris |
2004.10.12 - 01:44AM |
11: Wizards' Flu |
Anonymous |
I'm so glad she's preggers:) I was hoping that would happen!
Author's Response: :)
It was inevitable with all that shagging. Poor Ellie deserves to have a baby.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
shimmer |
2004.10.09 - 01:37PM |
11: Wizards' Flu |
Anonymous |
omg. you have a great story here! easily one of my favs... keep it going! and btw i'm dying of curiousity, how did she get pregnant??? was it just a fluke or what?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. The pregnancy will be explained much later in the story. I do hope you will stay tuned. |
LariLee |
2004.10.08 - 04:08AM |
9: En Fidelio Eternam |
Anonymous |
Still have me hooked! I think it's sweet the way they argue back and forth. :-D And Malfoy's an ass.
~Lisa
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up today. I think you will find it of particular interest. You may also find that I am a bit crazy. |
LariLee |
2004.10.06 - 04:16PM |
8: Werewolves and Murderers and Snapes, Oh My! |
Anonymous |
I'm totally engrossed. I'm hoping you'll continue this throught OOTP and beyond.
~Lisa
Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for! :)
I have so much more written and some still in my head. |
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