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| Obadiah Slope | 2004.12.27 - 03:13PM | 23: Young and Older | Signed |
| The underwear that Ellie was wearing paints such an amazing imagine in my mind that I can't seem to think to write anything else! Oh, youthful encounters - with enchanted bras??! Lol. Nice chapter; the interaction with Severus and his son was adorable. Can't wait to read more! Author's Response: LOL! The underwear is causing quite a stir! Thanks for the encouragement. I hope to post another chapter soon. | |||
| LariLee | 2004.12.26 - 08:57PM | 23: Young and Older | Signed |
| Dag* I want more! Now that I am understanding more of the prophecy, I do expect more. Love your Snape and that bra was marvelous! Lily might live up to your poem after all with her taste in lingerie. ;-D But Snape with his son is adorable! ~Lisa Author's Response: Funny you should mention the poem, because I wrote this chapter way before I wrote the poem. I am beginning to see a pattern to my thoughts when it comes to Lily, though. The prophecy, or curse, will be the focal point of the next 2 chapters. Thank you so much for your kind words, Lisa! You are awesome! | |||
| Vocalion | 2004.12.26 - 06:44PM | 23: Young and Older | Signed |
| After reading the part about the leprechaun on Ellie's bra, I can't think of anything else to say! Leaping from nipple to nipple pinching and smiling!!! I'm still laughing and can't review. Author's Response: LOL! I am glad you liked you it! God help me, sometimes I just can't stop myself. | |||
| Razzberry | 2004.12.21 - 10:12PM | 3: The Slytherin and the Gryffindor, part two | Signed |
| Very interesting plot turns here. And quite the knack for humo.r. "world famous horizontal gymnast"-- I'm still giggling over that. ~Jen | |||
| Jules | 2004.12.15 - 05:16AM | 22: In The Beginning There Was Blood | Signed |
| I couldn't help reviewing again ><
Heh heh... Nothing has ever made me squeal like an insane squirrel... I've been checking just about daily. Too excited to see if Ellie finds the knife. ^^
This is so NOT a good time to get Writers' Block... Author's Response: Actually, I have most of the rest of this story written. My writer's block is not affecting this story, but my final exams are. I have been studying like mad. I assure you that over the course of the next month I will update this story at least twice. "...squeal like an insane squirrel" LOL! That is hilarious! Thank you for the enthusiasm and I apologize for making you wait so long.###EllieK | |||
| belladonna | 2004.12.13 - 02:20AM | 18: And In Death | Signed |
| I am really enjoying your story. I wasn't at all pissed off by your departure from canon! At least you warned us. I love your expansion on jk's characters and your originals are very well written. You did a beautiful job with the present/past transitions in the earlier chapters. Nice writing!! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I enjoyed writing the scenes from the past tremendously. They are not over and will return in future chapters, I assure you. I am pleased that you can enjoy this for what it is: not canon. I find canon fanfiction to be the best, but I also have an appreciation for those which are not, as long as explainations are made and fully explored. There is nothing worse than an AU story that begins with HUGE canon deviances with no explaination of how thoses characters got where they are in the story. | |||
| Obadiah Slope | 2004.12.12 - 07:29AM | 22: In The Beginning There Was Blood | Signed |
| And finally, I am up to speed with the story! Hang on, only a couple of chapters to go? Noo! I vote for the ending that you choose; whatever you feel fits the story I believe will probably be the right decision. I've really enjoyed everything, and I can't wait to see what happens to Lucius. I was surprised how well Severus took the news about the baby - pleased, but surprised. Poor Ellie; she's been through a very rough time. Author's Response: Well, my chapters do average about 6,000 words or so. (There may be a sequel posted on Pureblood sometime in the future.) I debated about how Severus was going to take the news about the pregnancy, but decided that after he had been missing and near death for over 6 months, he would be more concerned about being with his wife. (He did make her promise that she would go to Malfoy, after all,) Loads to explain in the future...I hope you will be there for the adventure. Thank you so much for reviewing! ###EllieK | |||
| Pyrah | 2004.12.11 - 10:48AM | 22: In The Beginning There Was Blood | Anonymous |
| I really like this story. There's so many twists and turns, that just when you think everything's happy and nothing could go wrong, BAM! It's so awesome, kind of like trial and error, only better!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie! You are such a loyal reviewer! I hope to update on both sites very soon. | |||
| Obadiah Slope | 2004.12.10 - 03:39PM | 20: I Promised I Would | Anonymous |
| Well, I have to review after that chapter! Oh no! How could Ellie sleep with Lucius? I have to say, as an author, I was almost - almost - hoping that she would, to see how the plot developed from there, and now that it has happened, I feel very sorry for Severus. How is this going to be resolved? As for Sirius, I can understand that you might have future plans for him, but I did prefer it when he pegged it - in the books. I was never that fond of him originally; a travesty, I know! I don't particularly mind that he has returned - I can understand that it's hard to let go of a character that you have used to prominently in previous chapters, especially if you like him a great deal - and I will wait to see how the plot develops. I really have enjoyed the story so far, but my eyes are beginning to blur all the words into one, I'm afraid, so I'll have to do another marathon read during the weekend! Lol. I'll read some more soon! Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want to write in the Malfoy sex, but I had to. Believe it or not, it ties in strongly with a major plot point. About Sirius: I was upset for Harry more than I was about actually losing Sirius. Poor Harry! Everyone he loves is dead, just about. He finally had a tangible connection to his parents through Sirius and then, POOF...he's gone. Thanks so much for sticking with the story! I know the chapters are a bit long.###EllieK | |||
| Obadiah Slope | 2004.12.10 - 12:38PM | 15: Bits and Pieces | Anonymous |
| Lovely chapter; isn't Severus the doting father? It was so touching when Severus first spoke to his son - the insecurity and the worry; it was perfectly written and nicely balanced with humour. Congrats. Oh no, the happiness isn't staying? Why do I feel apprehensive about the future for the family?? Author's Response: There has much debate about Snape and fatherhood. Some say he would never have children. Some say that if he did he would be distant and cold. I say this: he would not want to be anything like his own father. This is a fluffy little tale so I have a semi-fluffy Snape. Thank you so much for all the compliments! I ahd no idea what I was doing when I wrote this story, but I did it anyway. The happiness...uhm, things are going to get odd from here on out in some respects. Don't worry too much because this is not really intended to be an angsty fic. It is more a fluffy fantasy with dashes of problems, mystery, and a touch of sadness. Thanks for reviewing ;) ###Liz | |||
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