Reviews for The Intruder
eroburn1 |
2006.10.01 - 09:57AM |
23: Chapter 23 - Epilogue |
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Good story:) she woulda been a Gryffindor.:)
Author's Response: Cheers! ;-) |
chickwithmonkey |
2006.07.30 - 06:45AM |
23: Chapter 23 - Epilogue |
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Lovely story. Thank you so much for writing it.
Author's Response: I'm so pleased you liked it. I'm now struggling with anotehr one. Kind words help a lot! |
tigger4will |
2006.05.30 - 10:44PM |
23: Chapter 23 - Epilogue |
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I really enjoyed this story! I was sad at the end... kinda wish it hadn't gone that route (just because I don't like to think about things like that!), but you handled it well.
Keep writing, and I'll look for your new stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks! I just uploaded a chapter for another story, so it's just a matter of getting it accepted. |
sarabella76 |
2006.05.29 - 12:09AM |
15: Chapter 15 - The Plan |
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Aw, I love how he was watching her and how Lupin got under her skin. And Dumbledore's comment was classic.
Author's Response: Dumbledore is such a hard character for me to write. In the books he's always saying things that I don't expect! |
sarabella76 |
2006.05.29 - 12:03AM |
14: Chapter 14 - The Night |
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Wow, this was very sweet and erotic at the same time. Very different from a lot of sex scenes I've read. I loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the reviews! |
sarabella76 |
2006.05.28 - 11:34PM |
9: Chapter 9 - The Strain of Composure |
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Ooh, evil dream. *cries* Would've been nice if it was real...
Author's Response: A lot of people got a turn with the dream. They were at once upset that Snape was OOC and disappointed that it was only a dream ;-) |
sarabella76 |
2006.05.28 - 11:15PM |
3: Chapter 3 - Threats, Taunts, and Jests |
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Aw, poor thing. I think the students hexing her and playing pranks on her is realistic. I could see how a Muggle intruding on their world would jar them and they'd want to get rid of her at all costs. She's strong, though. I like that.
Author's Response: Ater finishing the story I got more ideas of nasty hexes they could have tried on her, but I think she got enough abuse. |
KarenDetroit |
2006.01.30 - 03:58PM |
23: Chapter 23 - Epilogue |
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I had bookmarked eons ago, when it was half-done. Finally got to see the rest. Lovely story, thanks for finishing it!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! |
Bellasol67 |
2005.10.17 - 06:24PM |
23: Chapter 23 - Epilogue |
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This is the first story I've read featuring a non-canon character and I loved it! It was neat to see things from her perspective and while it was mean, I loved that the students were hexing her! I like the development of the relationship between her and Snape...the friendships she has w/ both Remus and Dumbledore...the frequent visits to Pomfrey. I would've liked to see more interaction between Harry, Ron, Hermione and herself...but the story was not lacking because of it. The epilogue was sad, but sweet. Lovely story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words! Frankly, Harry, Ron and Hermione are so thoroughly developed in the books that I'm actually AFRAID to write them in for fear of being OOC. Thanks again! |
Marianne |
2005.10.06 - 09:10AM |
23: Chapter 23 - Epilogue |
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I like your story very much though I would have like the last three chapters to be much longer . The development of their realtionship in the first 20 chapters is slower and more subtle. But it is really a great story, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for the great encouragement! Many people have complained that I gloss over the story. It's true that even whe I write more, I tend to get annoyed and I erase it all and just jot down the essentials. I've been working hard to improve that. |
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