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| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 09:35AM | 21: Chapter 21 - Triumph | Signed |
| You know, I have often wanted to hex the head of a codfish to many a receptionist’s shoulders in my time! I love your sense of humour - how do you think them up? Conversely, you conveyed her anxiety about Snape very well - from her frantic search for him, to the sad and poignant ending in St Mungo’s. Author's Response: Don't you just hate those patient little eye rolls you get when you ask a simple question? I mean, it's not your fault they've heard the same question fifty times that day! | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 09:25AM | 20: Chapter 20 - Mercurial Orb | Signed |
| There’s nothing like rejection to fan the flames of desire. Come back Snape – don’t take no for answer! She needs you! Author's Response: Well, he will... but it'll have to be half way. | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 08:47AM | 19: Chapter 19 - Diagon Alley | Signed |
| Nice idea about the magical bug. I had wondered if the polyjiuce theme would re-appear again – you have made good use of it here giving the plot an element of danger. And, as if Snape would turn up with a bouquet like that! Let’s hope he gets his just desserts from Snape’s fair hands. Author's Response: A lot of people have liked the little gadgets I made up for this story and in all honesty I hardly put two minutes thought in them (or I think not... this was a while ago). Anyway, I'm pleased as heck that people like them! | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 08:36AM | 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Gift Left Behind | Signed |
| As ever the strength of your OC characterisation shines through. She is so calm and resigned and full of self control. A very grown up woman and therefore just what your leading man needs. But she can’t leave! I do hope true love will win the day – I love happy endings. Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm a total romantic! | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 08:28AM | 17: Chapter 17 - More Forceful | Signed |
| Oooooh – golden ropes! Of course, purely for medicinal purposes, eh Severus? This was so sensitively written. Onto the next chapter then Author's Response: | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 08:20AM | 16: Chapter 16 - Try Again | Signed |
| Yes, Snape, who do you think you are kidding with all that ‘spell termination’ stuff? How very like him to so be reluctant in acknowledging his true feelings! Author's Response: Well, he wasn't about to show up with flowers, eh? Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 08:11AM | 15: Chapter 15 - The Plan | Signed |
| An interesting shift in perspective, here, to the Snape view of things. I like the way you have kept us wondering till now exactly what he thought of it all. I wonder if the ‘cure’ actually worked and what she feels now is, in fact, true and real but she does not recognise it yet. That was very naughty of Dumbledore to tease him like that but so like the old so and so! Onward once more…
Author's Response: You've hit the nail on the head! | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 07:52AM | 14: Chapter 14 - The Night | Signed |
| That was a very delicate and subtle love scene, with not one single cliché whatsoever. It was just lovely. Author's Response: Glad you liked it, I wanted to show how her emotions are in a turmoil now. | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 07:43AM | 13: Chapter 13 - The Offer | Signed |
| I like the way Snape softened and showed a more sensitive side right at the end. Their love-making would not be meaningful otherwise. I also like the fact that, at long last, he acknowledges her hard work and achievements – as well as her ability to match him verbally. Author's Response: 'Bout time too! Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Run Wild | 2005.03.20 - 07:32AM | 12: Chapter 12 - Creator of Potion | Signed |
| That was a well written Snape/heroine interaction. She has kept things bottled up for far too long. Her outburst was not only necessary for her mental well being, but it might just be the catalyst for Snape to face his own feelings for her. There was good characterisation of Snape too – I would imagine he’d be reticent, if not also a little clueless, with his emotions towards women. You have underplayed his reactions well, with just a glint here and there of what he too may be feeling. Author's Response: Snape is such a very hard character to write. Even if you have a very defined character for him in your own fic, it's hard to show his emotions unless you're in his head! | |||
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