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Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 06:55AM 11: Chapter 11 - Relentless Strain Signed
So, things have taken a more serious turn than I had hitherto expected. I think it is necessary at this point as it balances the range of emotion in the story. Onwards then, to Chapter 12.

Author's Response: Well... not _TOO_ serious ;)

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 06:45AM 10: Chapter 10 - Research Into Remedies Signed
I have to say I do like your attempt to create the universal Snape fic heroine here – a kind of Everywoman we can all relate to. Let’s face it – we all have had this kind of fantasy with Snape. I admire the fact you are acknowledging and addressing this in your narrative. I have never seen this approach before and I think it is great.

Author's Response: I've written two stories of that kind, but I have to admit that it's bit hard to go through it without a name or background. The next one I'm writing is NOT that vague.

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 06:26AM 9: Chapter 9 - The Strain of Composure Signed
Well, the dream sequence certainly had me fooled. What a delight a Snape massage would be. Yes, I just bet he’d be good with those hands!

Author's Response: Yes, a lot of people told me that they were about to complain that Snape was out of character when they just realized it was a dream.

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 06:15AM 8: Chapter 8 - The Fair Signed
I wonder if the infatuation potion, once its effects have worn off, will make her see Snape in another light? And maybe vice versa? Very interesting…and onward to Chaper 9.

Author's Response: Ah, if it were only that simple... Thanks for reviewing!

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 06:05AM 7: Chapter 7 - School Starts Signed
Loyola and Jaeger tried to kill the poor woman! When is Snape going to do his job as Head of Slytherin and sort out his students’ behaviour to her? I was hoping they would go to Dublin – it’s one of my favourite cities. They are certainly going to need those umbrellas there!

Author's Response: I've never been... and I'd LOVE to go!

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 05:52AM 6: Chapter 6 - Summer with the Order Signed
A gender change with polyjuice potion is a great idea. I know that body swapping has been done before (the SS/HG fic The Fire and the Rose, and the film Being John Malkovich are only two) but this is an unusual and original take. No wonder Snape was in a strop! A little envious perhaps of Lupin’s added perspective of our heroine?

Author's Response: Actually, in Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, Crouch Jr swaps places with his mother in Azkaban. I hadn't even thought about that when I wrote the chapter, or else I wouldn't have made such a big deal about it.

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 05:16AM 5: Chapter 5 - Magic Cancellation Signed
She might just yet prove her worth with her hard work and tenacity (character traits Snape seems to venerate). Again, I have to say I think the choice of a Muggle as a heroine who has to rely on her intelligence, rather than an innate magical ability, to solve things is an excellent one.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Can't tell you how many times I've put myself in that Muggle's place ;)

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 05:07AM 4: Chapter 4 - The Tower Signed
She needs to delegate the task of sorting out the attitude and bad behaviour of the students upwards to Dumbledore!

Author's Response: I think she's afraid that if she whines too often it'll just confirm to everyone that she doesn't belong here.

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 04:59AM 3: Chapter 3 - Threats, Taunts, and Jests Signed
I like the fact you have portrayed a heroine who isn’t immediately popular. The anti-Muggle sentiment is believable and an interesting hurdle our heroine will have to overcome. It’s nice to see her stand up against Snape’s bullying tactics.

Author's Response: Unfortunately, more often than not, she does not win the day :(

Run Wild 2005.03.20 - 04:41AM 2: Chapter 2 - An Invitation Signed
Well, OC heroines in Snape fiction usually get luxurious suites when they stay at Hogwarts. A brilliant idea to give her such a miserable little room – ha ha ha!

Author's Response: Well, there was a reason also, you see Umbridge will soon enter the picture and Dumbledore wants to keep ehr low key or else Umbridge will make sure she's obliviated and sent on her way!

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