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Reviews for To Travel Through Time: Part Two: Untouchable

Trickie Woo 2005.08.10 - 01:39AM 5: Trust Signed
I don't really understand all of that about the 9th circle of hell. Will an explaination be forthcoming? I've been out of town for a funeral or i would have read this sooner.

Author's Response: In some places, Hell has nine circles and the ninth is the hottest, most torturous, etc etc. It's just a figure of speech. Thanks! -Mel

Stuka 2005.08.01 - 11:51PM 4: To Teach Anonymous
This is wonderful! *floats in Dark-Side-muffiny-goodness*More soon please!

Author's Response: Why thank you! *hands over muffins* More coming up! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.08.01 - 07:17PM 4: To Teach Signed
What in the world is that paragraph about Constantine and Sebastion all about, it seems way out of context? I prefer Lupin Het and Kingsley always seems slightly macho het to me. Why not make Sirus and Peter lovers instead? It would give an interesting twist to what happened at Godric's Hollow and afterwards. I think, with practice she will succeed at Snape teaching.

Author's Response: *blink* What paragraph about Constantine and Sebastian? ... Ah. Apparently, I moved something from somewhere else here. Mm...*growls* Stupid computer. I didn't notice that, as I had already proofread it and merely copy-pasted. Let me see if I can fix this. Sirius and Peter? Eh. Not a big Peter fan. I prefer anything with Lupin, as long as it's not a really... really weird pairing like.... Lupin/Filch (I don't like anything with Filch...*Shudder*) I'm an avid lover of all things Snape and all things Lupin and some things Kingsley. (It would give an interesting twist, but I'm still not a Peter fan.) Thanks for the review, as always, and many more thanks for pointing out a little error. -Mel

Author's Response: Edited. Check it out for me, please? Did my best. -Mel

snivelly13 2005.07.30 - 12:41AM 3: The Staff Meeting Signed
I absolutely adore you and can't wait for chapter four. Thank you for the comment in your author notes, by the way. =D

Author's Response: *gasp* Thank you! It'll be here soon, it needs some proofreading. And, don't mention it, I always thank my reviewers! They're special! (cause they put up with my creative rambling) -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.07.29 - 04:42PM 3: The Staff Meeting Signed
Judging from her perfomance in the Staff Meeting she is basing Achlys' character on the adult Sevrus Snape. I'm wondering if the two of them, Kestrel/Achlys & Snape will somehow meet in the middle of the time period betwee 1967 and the present day, she would be older as Kestrel and he would be younger. They would be about the right age as romantic partners. No, that wouldn't work, unless she was into younger men. There must be some way to do it.

Author's Response: Oh, let's see about that, shall we? -- Um... I understood nothing of what you just said... *edges away* When you get your words in order, let me know... *giggle* -Mel

wytchkat 2005.07.25 - 07:15PM 2: Investigation Signed
hmmm...brain is working-what of her past that makes all so...suspicious of her? and how much is damned ole twinkle eyes aware of? oh and the scolding of snapie was just too cute!loved it! if book seven turns out to be horrible-i think i'll take up a petition on the forums to have you write us one that we can live with!great job!

Author's Response: *blush* Thank you so much! How much is he aware of? Hm...*thinks* I don't know really. *grins evilly* Thank you, thank you! *squeals* *hugs* (Sorry, I just had about my fifth cup of coffee...) -Mel

snivelly13 2005.07.25 - 12:22AM 2: Investigation Signed
Hurry up with the next one!

Author's Response: *laughs* I live to serve. *grin* Thanks! -Mel

Trickie Woo 2005.07.25 - 12:01AM 2: Investigation Signed
The decor of her rooms seems to veer between a room in Hell and rather good. Why would she keep sheets in her kitchen cabinet? Cookie sheets, baking sheets yes, but just sheets? Update soon so we can get on with the story, I'm curious as to who Achlys really is and why that was the point in time where Kestrel landed..

Author's Response: When I finally move out of the hellhole I currently live in, I'm thinking of using the decor I insert into my stories. *grin* Yes, baking sheets. I think I'll add that to not confuse people. *nods* All right, here we go! Many thanks! -Mel

wytchkat 2005.07.22 - 11:02PM 1: The Namesake Signed
oh wow! so wasn't expecting any of that. mmmmm....young sexy sevvie...maybe he hats that word b/c she used to use it? good job!

Author's Response: I know, I'm so good. *snicker* There's nothing like stroking your own ego...*giggle* Thanks, wytchkat, everything is much appreciated. (and you can ponder away...) -Mel

snivelly13 2005.07.22 - 02:04AM 1: The Namesake Signed
I've just spent the passed few hours (inbetween doing other things) reading the first of the trilogy and now this chapter. Wow. You are simply amazing. I love this and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: *blink* *giggle* Thank you! Thank you very much! I'm so glad you like it so far and I hope you managed to finish everything you have to do. *grin* -Mel

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