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| adelgado | 2011.06.06 - 11:59PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| Loved it. | |||
| June W | 2011.02.05 - 07:51AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| I adore this story! I've read it many times and always enjoy the characterizations and the potions magic. Neville shines in it, and the potion's effects on Snape are as horrifying as watching (movie) Benjamin Button de-age, unable to stop the process. Yes, I too would have cuddled baby Snape. And I would slapped that hussy Pansy for kissing teen-Snape... grrr... Thank you for writing this! | |||
| DeengoBlue | 2007.10.19 - 06:02AM | 2: Part Two | Anonymous |
| That certainly was a fun read. You did a rather good job of portraying Snape's utter horror, disgrace, and frustration at the events. Not to mention Neville's. Author's Response: Thank you! (And sorry for taking so long to reply.) I'm glad you enjoyed the story. | |||
| Sylvia Linslade | 2007.08.05 - 11:49PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| I had no idea it was possible to write a snarky toddler who is frustrated with others' denseness, but apparently it is. ;) Author's Response: Thanks! (And sorry for taking so long to reply.) I had fun trying to make him seem believably a baby yet still himself. | |||
| Aurora Greyeyes | 2007.07.25 - 07:13PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| I love how you ended this...Neville and Pansy. It was mean and nasty for him to give him detention but right Slytherin to set Pansy up. This is a very interesting idea, and I really like how you treated it. I can't imagne how terrible this would be for someone like Snape so independant to be forced to rely on others. Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. (Sorry for taking so long to reply.) It was fun to try to keep things fairly light and amusing while still showing that this situation was a dire thing for Snape. | |||
| Tai | 2007.06.11 - 07:06PM | 2: Part Two | Anonymous |
| Oh I so enjoyed this story! I think you had Severus and Neville perfectlly down pat. The other characters too.
The words Sev said to Nev in the end were both insightful and not of the bat.
So, is he gonna be playing matchmaker? *Eg* Author's Response: Thank you so much! (And sorry for taking so long to reply.) The intention when I wrote the story was that yes, Snape was going to play matchmaker, but I guess JKR has shot that down. :-) | |||
| Faraday | 2007.06.10 - 08:27AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| I enjoyed this. Very sweet and well put together Author's Response: Thank you! (And sorry for taking so long to reply.) I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed the story. | |||
| Mallorn | 2006.06.24 - 03:09PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| Thank you for this unique story. What I think I liked the most, in addition to how you write Snape, is that I never felt entirely sure of the ending. Well done! Author's Response: Thanks very much! And thanks also for letting me know what worked well with the story; that's very valuable information to a writer seeking to improve! :D | |||
| abbi cee | 2006.06.02 - 03:05PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
| It was late at night and before bed I was just randomly following various inks when one led me to one of your stories, Faint Hope, which I really enjoyed and that, of course, led me to your other stories and, thus, to this one.
I have a fondness for Snape deaged stories and this was such a treat. I love how Snape kept his Snapishness even as an infant. I love how Neville kept at things when a weaker boy might have turned tail and run. I really love how Hermione, while still smart, wasn't the know-it-all who saved the day. This story is definitly going into my favorites folder. In fact, I think many of your stories are going to make it there. :-) Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a lovely review! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you so much for telling me what you liked about it. :-D | |||
| memory | 2006.05.03 - 01:23PM | 2: Part Two | Anonymous |
| Treasure-hunt review n. 1: This is my FAVORITE story, the best of your production, in my humble opinion. I simply love the way you portrayed Snape, keeping him in canon, giving him his full nasty personality but enriching it with doubts, fears and other human weaknesses. Your Dumbledore is much more human than Rowling’s (as your Snape, anyway) and I find him very appealing. So caring, he is really the father Snape never (?) had. I specially liked the interactions between Snape, Dumbledore and the youngest characters. Neville is one of my preferred and Hermione, so keen in analyzing Snap’e psychology, is greatly enjoyable. The part I liked most is the “puberty”: Snape changing his voice (“my life is at a sta-ke here!”) and Dumbledore falling about the place in laughter are fantastic. I could go on revising for hours so I stop here and say: I sincerely believe this piece is a little gem. Thanks for writing it! Author's Response: Hi Memory, Thanks so much; this was my first fanfic ever, and I'm still very fond of it. I'm happy to hear you liked it best. :) Thank you for your very kind review (actually reviews - I'm going to answer them in order :D). | |||
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