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Reviews for The Moment It Began

linda0506 2009.09.07 - 04:57PM 84: Chapter Eighty-Four Signed
I'm so pleased Lily's dad made it. But I don't think Lily and Severus are out of danger yet. I am looking forward to the next chapter, especially as it is about the wedding night!

Author's Response: I was cruel to torment my readers like that, huh?

aurora borealis 2009.09.04 - 08:07PM 84: Chapter Eighty-Four Signed
WHEW! What a relief that Ross didn't die. Hopefully Severus and Lily will look back on the happy parts of their wedding day. The description of the wedding, and Severus' and Lily's happiness was beautiful. I liked the paragraph where Severus is cleaning up and wondering how things could go from an adrenaline rush to mundane so quickly. Yes, there is always some ordinary cleaning up to do in the midst of the most exciting things. And indeed, how did those pesky Death Eaters know where the wedding was being held???? Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

geomancer 2009.09.01 - 04:08PM 84: Chapter Eighty-Four Signed
Hmmm, I wonder who might be working on the inside to give away the wedding and help the Death Eaters pass their defenses. I also wonder why nobody was killed. Curiouser and curiouser.

Author's Response: Good questions to be asking!




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