Reviews for The Moment It Began
linda0506 |
2009.09.07 - 04:57PM |
84: Chapter Eighty-Four |
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I'm so pleased Lily's dad made it. But I don't think Lily and Severus are out of danger yet. I am looking forward to the next chapter, especially as it is about the wedding night!
Author's Response: I was cruel to torment my readers like that, huh? |
aurora borealis |
2009.09.04 - 08:07PM |
84: Chapter Eighty-Four |
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WHEW! What a relief that Ross didn't die. Hopefully Severus and Lily will look back on the happy parts of their wedding day. The description of the wedding, and Severus' and Lily's happiness was beautiful. I liked the paragraph where Severus is cleaning up and wondering how things could go from an adrenaline rush to mundane so quickly. Yes, there is always some ordinary cleaning up to do in the midst of the most exciting things. And indeed, how did those pesky Death Eaters know where the wedding was being held???? Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! |
geomancer |
2009.09.01 - 04:08PM |
84: Chapter Eighty-Four |
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Hmmm, I wonder who might be working on the inside to give away the wedding and help the Death Eaters pass their defenses.
I also wonder why nobody was killed. Curiouser and curiouser.
Author's Response: Good questions to be asking! |
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