Reviews for The Unconditional Vow
Daizy Brandon |
2008.08.28 - 04:30AM |
13: Fly in the Ointment |
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Very nice! My breath caught in my throat for a moment while reading about her hand on Severus's chest. And I could just hear his dark dreamy voice in the line, "Would you care to explain?"
Author's Response: Oh, I *know*! I have to work really hard to keep things platonic... |
star_girl |
2008.08.03 - 06:38AM |
13: Fly in the Ointment |
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This is very well written, I can't wait for the next update. The parts about implanting false memories for the Dark Lord are very clever indeed.
Author's Response: Welcome, and thanks very much. Update iminent! |
Rose of the West |
2008.08.01 - 01:08PM |
13: Fly in the Ointment |
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Excellent chapter. You've got me on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Thanks again! |
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