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Reviews for All the Time in the World

Emerald124 2007.08.11 - 05:45PM 1: All the Time in the World Anonymous
Hey, good story! I liked this!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review, Emerald! :)

pudella 2007.08.11 - 02:42PM 1: All the Time in the World Signed
Fantastic! It really bothered me knowing Snape died with all that weight on his shoulders, and this story shows him finally getting the truth he deserved.

Author's Response: Yes, this one was "for" him - I didn't want to make it too easy on him, but at the same time...only good payback here :). Thank you so much for the review!

Rwhen/Julia 2007.08.10 - 04:05PM 1: All the Time in the World Anonymous
Ah, you know I already love it and the changes you made I really do think helped. Thanks for sharing once again. I feel like I expect you to keep turning out works for me to read, but that is totally unreasonable. I will ever be available to read your works, Mith.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, my loyal reader :) I will be sure to let you know the next time I finish something...but it will be awhile, unfortunately. Most things I write aren't this short!

Prefiera de Gryfalco 2007.08.10 - 03:15PM 1: All the Time in the World Signed
Most excellent and an interesting twist with him meeting Fabian, who I don't think I've met this side of fan fiction. A real pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Now I wish I knew a good Gideon and Fabian story, to point you in the direction of! But you're right, they don't come up much - probably a bit too old to be contemporaries of the Marauders, and of course killed before *that* Halloween night. But I've always found them intriguing, and I really liked that Harry got his watch. The event they discuss here is a scene in my other, longer, fic....but that is only a brief cameo for him. Sorry! Thank you so much for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

SamusAran 2007.08.10 - 08:33AM 1: All the Time in the World Signed
What a lovely story. So touching. I almost got teary at the end. I loved the bits with the Marauders and Lily. One of the many tragedies of Snape's death is that Lupin and the other fallen heroes died thinking him a traitor.

Author's Response: I know! It's nice that she's said Harry will do everything he can to exonerate him, but still - that doesn't change the fact that, at the moment he died, *everyone* thought him Voldemort's man. Luckily, Dumbledore seemed very well informed at King's Cross, so I can only hope that the fallen heroes would learn the truth...somehow. Thank you for the review, SamusAran.

handpfeather 2007.08.09 - 10:51PM 1: All the Time in the World Anonymous
stands alone very well. I really enjoyed your description - especially the part with Sirius and Snape! Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hoped my backstory wouldn't need much explanation. Sirius was difficult, so I'm glad you enjoyed that part.

Deeble 2007.08.09 - 10:31PM 1: All the Time in the World Signed
Very touching, in a perfectly Snape-compliant way.

Author's Response: I felt like I was very gradually uncoiling him, so he didn't feel Snape-compliant...but I'm glad he came across that way! Thanks for the review, Deeble.

Where 2007.08.09 - 07:36PM 1: All the Time in the World Signed
Cheers, it was brilliant. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, Where! I'm glad you thought it well done.

EXECUTR 2007.08.09 - 07:27PM 1: All the Time in the World Anonymous
Great story! I would only make one small change. At the end, I think Snape would have said "fortunately", instead of "unfortunately". According to Dumbledore, Harry is more like Lily than James, and I rather doubt Severus has developed a sudden liking for James. Anyway, thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, EXECUTR! Yes, I struggled with that line. Basically, Snape has decided to offer a compliment to Harry (who is not present), and unless he modifies it in some way, it will be a compliment to James, too. Complimenting James would be too much for him at this stage, I think! So, the "unfortunately" is a slight dig at James, but much more good-natured than the barbs they used to exchange. I'll have to mull over what "fortunately" would do to the line ;).

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