Occlumency :: A Severus Snape archive

Reviews for The Overlooked

Miss Granger	2007.05.22 - 11:20AM	17: Seventeen	Anonymous
Oh, I'm sure that was a relief for Snape (and the rest of us!). Very hot, but still tasteful. Good job. As this story proceeds, though I'm getting more and more worried as to how these two can possibly manage to work things out. Looking forward to more!

firewall	2007.05.20 - 09:13PM	17: Seventeen	Anonymous
Finally! I thought he was going to continue to be noble and ignore his need to be with Celeste. She really is an awesome OFC and perfectly suited to Severus. I continue to wait to see hwo you are going to align your story to canon, especially since you are following it so closely. This story is a real favourite of mine.

amr	2007.05.20 - 04:00PM	17: Seventeen	Anonymous
Evans? Her landlady's name is Evans? As in Lily Evans? Or as in Mark Evans? This story is still wonderful, and this chapter even more than the ones preceding it. (I thought I couldn't review on this site, so I haven't been, but now I find I can after all.) You've really made me feel the rain and the seaside air and see the old rooming house. And Celeste is nicely written as always. But surely eventually he's going to have to take her to Hogwarts, isn't he? I'm looking forward to that.