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| greenwood | 2007.05.19 - 10:37PM | 1: The Path of the Alchemist | Anonymous |
| Very nice short story. My only comment was that you didn't have any indication of a "time shift" and I had to read the paragraph with Severus at Dumbledore's tomb twice to understand what had just happened. I liked your reintroduction of the stone and it's higher meaning. You also had Snape in character - your past Snape was very snarky. Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. | |||
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