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Reviews for Unintended Consequences 2

memory 2007.04.01 - 10:22AM 5: Return to Hogwarts Anonymous
12-03-2007 18:44 Rated 10

Good and interesting as always! Just a quick message to let you know I'm here and waiting to read more. Looking forward to reading Snape's next meeting with the Dark Lord! Mariaemilia

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!


pudella 2007.04.01 - 10:21AM 5: Return to Hogwarts Anonymous
11-03-2007 03:42 Rated 10

I liked the explanation of how to extract a memory (recall the start of the memory and move the wand away while recalling the ending). Your character interactions are excellent, from the conversations to their thoughts to their reactions to one another.

Author's Response: Hi pudella!

I figured since it does not seem to involve any special wand motions or incantations, a simple explanation for the memory extraction makes the most sense. It's good to hear that you like how I write my characters. That's my favorite thing about writing, trying to make them convincing and interesting.

Thanks for your review!






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