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Reviews for Unintended Consequences

Vorona	2007.04.29 - 06:53PM	7: A New Beginning	Signed
I really enjoyed this story. I think you have done a wonderful job of keeping Snape in character, and describing his relations with the Death Eaters and Dumbledore. Sometimes, I wonder why people choose Snape to write about because he's out of character, but whenever he is in character, it's such a pleasure. As is the case with this story: I could really feel all of Snape's emotions and they all felt both true and poignant. Fantastic! Author's Response: Hi Vorona, it is always nice to hear from a satisfied reader. Thanks! I have to agree with Rowling about Snape - he's a gift of a character and a lot of fun to write.

memory	2007.04.01 - 10:17AM	7: A New Beginning	Anonymous
25-10-2006 07:53 Rated 10 Hello again from Rome! Sorry for being so late in reviewing your last chapters, but I have had many things going on and couldn't check this site for a long period. Anyway, I thought of you and here I am. Again , I have particularly enjoyed this story and I'm sorry it is finished. You should think to write a more extended novel, some 35/40 chapters... OK, joking aside, I liked very much the interaction between Dumbledore and Snape. Dialogs are always smooth, full of intriguing details that open new possibilities of discovering more about the characters. Also, I found here and there some interesting little hints that could lead to the creation of other stories. Your exploration of Snape's personality is really enjoyable, and I hope we will discover his good side in book 7 too. In the meantime, I'm looking forward to your new productions! Send them soon and as good as this one. Saluti dall'Italia, Mariaemilia. Author's Response: Hi mariaemilia, A novel of 35-40 chapters? Sounds like an excellent idea...right after my sons start primary school and my boss fires me...:D This story is actually very likely to have a sequel. I have large parts of three chapters written. Unfortunately, at present none of those is Chapter 1. Good to hear from you! Ciao, Zara

Deeble	2007.04.01 - 10:16AM	7: A New Beginning	Anonymous
15-10-2006 18:34 Rated 10 I enjoyed your tale -- we all wonder about this time in Snape's life. Author's Response: Hi Deeble, Thanks for stopping by to leave me your feedback! I am glad you enjoyed mt story.