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MollysSister 2006.09.11 - 09:39PM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
So I thought that Aurelia's parents disowned her when she married her first husband becasue he was a griffendor? So wouldnt they be back since she has snagged the king of the Slytherins? Maybe there was some back story that addressed this and I missed it? I read the first bits of this story awhile back and just now happned upon it again happy to see it is complete. Excellent

Author's Response: Yes, her parents were upset and disowned her, but I think she would find any reacceptance to be superficial. Though stranger things do happen in life. I'm glad you came back to finish it. :D

Prefiera de Gryfalco 2006.07.24 - 01:15AM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
"It was a small step, but that was how he did things." *claps* YES! Very true! What a nice warm fuzzy chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, again. I'm glad you agree that Severus would move very slow in the emotional arena. Yes, he can react rashly, but that's when dealing with anger and other negative emotions. I imagine he doesn't really know what to do with positive ones. LOL

greenwood 2006.07.17 - 03:45PM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
Great chapter. For a minute there I thought that something was going to happen to Lupin and she would loose the baby. I am so glad that didn't happen. It would have been so hard on everyone. Lucius got off...humm that isn't a good sign. I bet we have not seen the last of him. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. I've decided that there has been enough heartache and trauma for now...And yeah, Lucius is still lurking out there, much to everyone's dismay. I have the final bits outlined, we'll see if it's all one chapter or not. :)

Yael Alexis 2006.07.17 - 11:51AM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
Lovely chapter! The issue between Julia and her mother is very natural but hope sincerely it won't last too much. Is Hagrid still alive? It would be so nice to have him come back! Have to check your 'Wounded' story once again, I've forgotten who survived the last battle and who did not. Thanks for the update, can hardly wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks, Alexis. Hagrid is out there with Grawp, so I'll answer that question for you. :) He just couldn't face Hogwarts after everything else.... I'm glad you found Julia and Aurelia's tension believable. Everything can't be happy all the time. Though, hopefully Julia will come around. :)

memory 2006.07.16 - 04:04PM 14: Chapter 14 Signed
Still no mention of the future baby: girl or boy? Haven't they got proper examinations these damned wizards? This uncertainty is killing me! ... Seriously, the story is always highly enjoyable and I'm sorry that the end is approaching. I'm also glad anyway that you didn't make all "roses and flowers", as we say in Italy: it means that not everything is going as happily as desired. Julia hating her mother and step-father is very believable, while Severus and Aurelia are definitely cute. Just a note from the mother I am: I would try to stay nearer to my daughters in a moment like this. They could feel excluded, as if they were part of a past that is no more existing (their father will never come back and will soon be substituted by another man) meanwhile a totally new future is going to be born (a new family with a new baby). Waiting anxiously for more...

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. As for the baby, we'll she's only been pregnant a little over a month at this point. *wink* And not everyone wants to know ahead of time....Julia gave me a great opportunity for teenage agnst. I can really see her having that reaction as someone who was close to her father. Not to mention with someone who wouldn't come up on Britain's most eligible wizard list. LOL This is one secret that Julia would probably like never got out. There's always such a fine line between being there and smothering. Julia's going to need some space for a while, but hopefully she will realize how hard-headed she's being. Either that or someone will have to smack her around. LOL I need to formalize my plans for the last chapter and then we'll see if it really is the last one. Sometimes I have too much ground to cover. :)




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