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| Melpomene Erato | 2006.08.08 - 10:11AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Actually, she woke up after being kidnapped. Maybe Malfoy *did* something to her while she was out. Maybe it was his intention to force to his will by using a child... that's why he didn't use Imperius? Maybe the baby isn't Snape's? Author's Response: Possible, but you would have to keep reading. Okay, I know you have. :D I really should respond to reviews more often. LOL I wouldn't put it past Lucius though. He is a slimy bastard in this one. | |||
| Prefiera de Gryfalco | 2006.07.24 - 12:58AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| You have Sev pretty much totally in character in character...great chapter! Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you agree this is how he would act. Future set fics always prove problematic because you want him to grow as a person, but you need to make that growth believable. :D | |||
| greenwood | 2006.06.28 - 08:11PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Another wonderful and emotional chapter. I really liked the banter after Severus found out he was to be a father - very well done. I am also relieved at the outcome and not left with a bloody cliff hanger to wait on (*snark*). I look forward to the next chapter of this amazing story. Author's Response: Thanks. I had tons of fun with Severus's reaction. He's not the type that likes surprises and this was about the biggest one you coudl have. LOL I know, I failed in my cliffhanger duties. LOL The next one is in the queue. | |||
| memory | 2006.06.27 - 09:14AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Great story! I keep being too involved in it. Luckily, all is well that ends well... You know how afraid I was of this chapter! I'm glad that he is beginning to accept his paternity, even if I think it's a long way to go for a man of his kind and his experiences.
Now, will the baby be another girl or a boy? (a girl, a girl, easier for him to love... sorry, always too involved... but I'm married with a man that is very similar to Severus in his reactions, that's probably why I'm partecipating so much). Waiting for the new chapters!!! mep Author's Response: I'm so glad to see that you are so engrossed in the story. :)... I'm glad you liked this chapter despite your trepidation going into it. LOL Poor Severus will be forced to grow up and mature now that he has this huge responsibility looming before him. As for the sex of the child, I know the answer to that question, but I won't reveal it too soon. | |||
| amycnorm98 | 2006.06.26 - 09:35PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Wonderfully written as always. :) Author's Response: Thank you very much. :D This was my favorite chapter to write so far. | |||
| EXECUTR | 2006.06.26 - 08:44PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Nothing like making up. Author's Response: There sure isn't, is there? Thanks for reviewing. :D | |||
| Yael Alexis | 2006.06.26 - 07:58PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| You were right. ;-) I loved this chapter! Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Now I just need to finish up that scene that's giving me fits in the next chapter. LOL | |||
| AmandaB | 2006.06.26 - 06:30PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| I liked the fact that Snape was surly and uncommunicative, since that's so in character. I do feel he would not believe that he would have anything to offer a child, and would be reluctant to raise one. I loved the comment about children only being interesting when they were school age. I hope that everything works out with the wedding, and look forward to how this story continues. Author's Response: Thanks, Amanda. He really did just pull himself right back into his shell, didn't he? That news was a quite a setback for him. He was so much fun to work with in this chapter. LOL I was especially fond of his 'proposal'. ROTFL That's got to be one of my favorite lines I've ever given him. | |||
| Aiden | 2006.06.26 - 07:57AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Great chapter. Snape is truly hopeless at human relations. Luckily, Aurelia has the patience and insight to wait while he learns. Great OFC. Thanks for the fast update. Author's Response: Thanks, Aiden. I really love Snape in this one. He's so much fun when he's socially awkward. And yes, he is lucky that Aurelia has the patience to see that there is a jewel waiting to be polished beneath his gruff exterior. | |||
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