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| JamesandLily4ever | 2006.05.20 - 07:23PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| I am sooooo amazed at this chapter!!! You totally got me in the last one when they froze when they opened the door! ;)
Your Sev is soooo very right! I wonder who just talked to him...(I hope that it's not part of the trio or something like that...)
~J+L4ever Author's Response: Thanks J+L4ever. I'm glad that you are enjoying this story. It's been a lot of fun for me to write. | |||
| MollysSister | 2006.05.17 - 05:21PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Who is the wealthy benefactor (is that redundant?) to the poisons ward? Maybe Adrian? I think the accusatory voice would be Harry? Author's Response: Hehehe!!! One of those is answered in the next chapter. The other, it'll take a little bit longer. | |||
| ljasell | 2006.03.17 - 07:40PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| This is a great story. Not only is it realistic, it is also true to the characters.
Your story is one of the good ones. Thanks. Author's Response: THanks, ljasell. This story has been a real joy for me to write even if it hasn't been the easiest. I actually have it plotted out in quite a bit of detail, which is astonishing that I'm still following that plot outline. :) I'm glad that you are enjoying it. | |||
| AmandaB | 2006.03.16 - 01:59PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| I like the fact that they are taking things slow, because it's realistic, and it also seems in character for Snape to not know how to act around a woman. I loved the fact that he muses that Aurelia is important enough to wait for, because often he is portrayed as just taking what he wants with women. Remus's transformation was interesting, it would be exciting if he was able to prevent the transformation entirely. I liked that you showed how awkward Snape was in public, especially being the centre of attention. Hmm, who thinks Snape shouldn't be there? Keep writing. Author's Response: Thanks, Amanda. I have really enjoyed writing awkward Snape, even if it is incredibly difficult. I think in the past he would have been the "get what I want and get it now" type of person, but he realized that she is special and he's at a crossroads of life. Poor Severus still isn't sure of his place in the post war world and I think it really shows having to be out with wizarding society...As for Remus, I really love his character and had to have him back in this story. Plus, it sort of gives Aurelia and Severus another excuse to work together a bit. :) I will be working on the next chapter once I get back from my mini-vacation | |||
| Aiden | 2006.03.16 - 12:33AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Nice chapter. I am guessing that voice at the end is either Moody or Harry! Author's Response: Thanks, Aiden. As for the voice, all I can say is that it will be revealed in the next chapter. :) | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2006.03.16 - 12:29AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| I think the chapter turned out to be well worth the time you and your betas put into it. I'm glad everything went as smoothly as it did during the rest of his visit. The best part was when he decided to try the hormonal teenage boy's approach to making out, but that resulted in him having to jerk off under the covers just like a teenage boy. Poor Severus! As an afterthought, can't you just imagine what the boys' dorms at Hogwarts must smell like?
But things are looking up, she enjoys being with him and is proud to be seen with him in public. This is the first time I've read a story where his romantic interest has children. The girls actually like him and approve of a relationship between him and their mother. I've read stories where the OC is a widow, but never one where she had children, it adds a nice twist to the story. It's like a plot from a Cary Grant movie, he feels all insecure and bewildered about women and thinks that a woman could never be interested in him. But he's Cary Grant (make that Severus Snape), what woman wouldn't be interested in him? I'll be waiting some what impatiently for your next chapter. Author's Response: Trickie, thanks again for the wonderfully in depth review. This really was the hardest chapter I have ever written. I kept writing the same thing over and over, no growth, and I got it beaten into me that I needed to keep going with that. LOL...As for her having children, I find it's an interesting twist. I enjoy them, but I dont' want them around too much. :) That's an interesting comparison to Cary Grant (one of my favorite actors, BTW)...And thanks for that thought about the smell fo the boys dorm rooms. *yuck* That was not something I've done and not something I really wanted to think about. LOL...And Severus has to be feeling pretty good right now. :-D Even if it was somewhat embarrassing to have her ask him out, but hey, it worked. | |||
| amycnorm98 | 2006.03.15 - 11:56AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Glad to see Snape and Aurelia are making steady progress. I'd like to know who the accusatory voice belongs to! Author's Response: Yes, they are making progress. Not as fast as he would like, though. LOL As for the voice, that will be revealed next chapter. :) | |||
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