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Reviews for Darkness and Light 2: Personal Risks

CareCrystal	2005.12.07 - 12:34PM	5: Stand and Wait	Signed
Maud's profession of love for Snape is one of the most beautifully-written and believable declarations I have ever read. This is a wonderful story---and a absolute delight to read! Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed!

alis	2005.12.07 - 12:02PM	5: Stand and Wait	Anonymous
i love the way in which you write romance, but without the fluff...... (although I'm not sure if I like dumbledore knowning about it). Author's Response: Dumbledore actually took me by surprise as well -- when Snape said that line about the Headmaster, I literally jumped in my seat as I was writing it! Anyway, I hope the next chapter will put your concerns to rest. And thanks for the kind words!

Potioncat	2005.12.07 - 09:44AM	5: Stand and Wait	Signed
"You are not in the least loveable," she said, returning his gaze with a steadiness she did not feel. "You are sarcastic and high-handed and maddeningly indirect; you leave your hair greasy and your teeth yellow for reasons I cannot fathom; Oh, I love that speech. I've seen other fanfics that deal with the OC and Snape's appearance, but none that were this frank and un-fluffy. Very nice. This chapter was well written and well paced. And what an ending! I hope we won't be waiting long for the next one. Author's Response: Yay! I especially appreciate the "un-fluffy" comment, as that was what I was aiming for -- it helps to hear that you think I've succeeded. Thanks for this and all your other comments!