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| EXECUTR | 2006.05.15 - 09:08PM | 21: Chapter 21 | Signed |
| You sure know how to leave us hanging! Please continue. | |||
| Ravenwood | 2006.05.13 - 09:09AM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
| hmm, i don't know when your last post was, i have taken a hiatus from this fandom. I think, that you have done well to set up the scenario. But the time has long come for the end. While rich in imagery and description, i think that you suffer from overwriting to the point of tedium. I find that i already know the psychological trauma of the characters and the constant reiteration tiring. Saying this, i would really like to see your resolution, perhaps Severus's victory somehow. Though, the nature of the beast as it currently is, indicates that you may not know where it is going yourself. I don't know whether you have yet abandoned this story. I think that you should finish it, give closure to what has started. Synthesis my Slytherin friend, synthesis. Author's Response: Patience ;o)! We're almost there...I'd never even dream about abandon FaJwE, it is more or less finished, actually. What's still giving me headaches, though, is the last chapter, which will be chapter 25. So there's only a little more to struggle through, and I truly do hope you'll stay (and bear!) with me until the end;o)!! | |||
| EXECUTR | 2006.05.01 - 07:14PM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
| This is a good story. Please continue. Author's Response: Thank you for rour review - andI will!! Chapter 21 is up but and will be running as soon as Sycophant hex approves ;o)! | |||
| Auburn | 2006.04.08 - 06:49PM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
| I'm still at the edge of my seat, waiting for what's coming next! You are such a talented writer. I'm in awe at the way you let your readers feel what the characters are going through, with your deep desciptions. The story is simply breath taking, and I can hardly wait for more. Keep on writing! Author's Response: I'm so very sorry for keeping you waiting!! The story's actually already finished, except for the last chapter, but real life's a bitch at the moment and keeps me from answering wonderful reviews like yours (thanx!!) as well as from posting the remaining chapters. But I promise to be a better author and get the next parts of FaJwE uploaded soon! | |||
| MithLuin | 2006.03.06 - 04:22PM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
| Intense! It was emotionally draining just to read that! I can't imagine what it must take to write this.... My thanks. I am glad Remus got to see the sigils on his chest - that was powerful. And 'Krabat's Tale' was the perfect answer to Remus' fear...I wonder if this is a hint of how Severus is going to escape the ritual? Author's Response: Thanks - especially for your empathy concerning the writing of this piece, which is not always fun. Not at all. About Krabat's Tale hinting at an out for Severus...who ever said he actually *will* escape the ritual ;o)))? | |||
| Kedd | 2006.03.04 - 09:27PM | 20: Chapter 20 | Signed |
| That was an incredible chapter. I'm still slightly in shock - what a powerful way to end! There was one grammatical error I saw (a 'to' instead of a 'too' right after Remus comes in, in the sentence 'To exhausted to resist...'). However, I very nearly didn't even remember I was so blown away by the rest of it. I can't wait to see how this tale turns out and I'm already anticpating the next chapter with a combination of anxiety and glee.
Cheers!
Kedd Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that 'to/too-issue' out!! I've corrected things along with some other flaws the guys from sycophanthex found/suggested...;o)). I'm thrilled you liked this chapter so much! It's one of my own favourites, for the mixture of terror and sweetenss in it; something which also defines the relationship between Severus and Remus: they don't seem to get one without the other. | |||
| MithLuin | 2006.02.27 - 10:29PM | 19: Chapter 19 | Signed |
| The madness _will_ begin soon, won't it?? This chapter was gut-wrenching, in a very muted way. I think there is something tantalizing about your portrayal of a tense, wounded and broken Severus...through Remus' eyes. It becomes....exquisite pain, whereas from Severus' POV it is merely meaningless pain. Author's Response: I'm so glad you approve of how the entire situation was told solely from Renus's POV! It was the first time Severus didn't get his say about how he's feeling, and I was a little afraid it would all end up being too descriptive. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this particular point!! | |||
| MithLuin | 2006.02.06 - 11:00PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
| That last chapter was just...painful. Poor, poor Snape. I am glad Lupin has figured out something that Snape hasn't, and I am wondering what Malfoy is up to - sure, he's a friend of Snape's, but is he willing to risk his own neck for...what? I hope we do in the Dark Lord soon! Author's Response: We will probably find out a little more about Lucius's motives...might take some more chapters, though... As for Voldemort - well, they're doing their best, rest assured ;o)!! Thanks a lot for your comment! | |||
| Ravenwood | 2006.01.21 - 07:18PM | 17: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| still awash with darkness. yet again you make Severus's pain tangible, audible even, over the distance of text. Author's Response: It's *very* reassuring to know that the story still gets those horrors across. I was a little afraid of too much redundancy concerning the Severus-Voldemort-interaction - but you still approve, so it seems to still be working. Thanks!! | |||
| Ravenwood | 2006.01.15 - 07:21PM | 16: Chapter 16 | Anonymous |
| Interesting times... Author's Response: They are, aren't they? ;o) | |||
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