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Reviews for To Travel Through Time: Part One: Chronos Taxiclevo Filtro

Trickie Woo	2005.06.01 - 11:07PM	11: Tale Behind the Trade	Signed
I read this chapter early this evening when it was first posted. I found it to be a very difficult chapter for me to handle. I wasn't up to reviewing it right after I read it and I'm still having difficulty with it. I hope the next chapter has something brighter and more upbeat in it. Author's Response: I am sincerely sorry for the angst in this story. Believe me, if it had been someone else, they could have laid on the angst loads thicker. The next chapter is DEFINITELY more upbeat. It's cheerful and we introduce Kestrel's mother figure. grin Please put up with me. Chapter 15 is the thickest amount of angst in the whole story and just for you I will put a summary at the end with all the important details so you don't have to suffer. (unless you WANT to, of course.) But don't worry. Chapter 12 remains as one of my favorite chapters. -Mel -Mel

wytchkat	2005.06.01 - 09:11PM	11: Tale Behind the Trade	Signed
that was a lot to digest!why would the house elf know about the painting? why does that last line make me think of snape's memory where he was killing flies? good job again! Author's Response: I know it was and I wish that I could have put it more softly. I am sincerely trying to keep angst to a minimum and I believe that I've succeeded. There's is some because they have demons, but there is not as much as I could put in. The house elf knows about the paintings because she had them done while she was young. I'm glad the last line made you think of that. I put it there because he's talking about the gods and fickle fate, picking out people to have bad pasts. -Mel