Reviews for Much Ado About Nothing
| the_ bass_player312 |
2005.07.07 - 07:59PM |
8: Chapter Eight |
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| This is really well portrayed, I'm a real fan of shakespeare and the characters are coming across nicely. Keep up the good work. |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.27 - 12:55AM |
8: Chapter Eight |
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| Oh, man, I so wish I were at this ball! Everyone who wants It, is seeing action. Get me in!! Dear me, I think that Remus is being a git. Correct me if I am wrong, but Severus knows it is Sirius, doesn't he? And Severus knows (obviously) that Sirius is posing as Remus, right? So it is just sex, not emotion, right? Ah, so delicious!! Keep it coming, no pun intended, well, maybe so.... |
| Ali1124 |
2005.05.19 - 09:15AM |
8: Chapter Eight |
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| Keep it going! |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.13 - 10:27PM |
7: Chapter Seven |
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| Oh dear, I don't think Severus should back down, I think he should fight! Get mean! Get what he wants! Keep writing! I want to see where this goes! |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.13 - 10:26PM |
6: Chapter Six |
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| I know you are probably writing this in parallel with the play, so I need to look that up the next time I can. It's sitting on my shelf. I like Lily's friendship with Severus, and it cracked me up the way they were all talking about mixing up the mens' body parts...and 'James' tongue in Regulus' mouth' was clever... |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.13 - 10:23PM |
5: Chapters Four and Five |
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| Minerva will be so confused when this all falls out... Interesting take on the Death Eaters' personalties and interactions. I am left wondering if they are working undercover...or just haven't formalized their associations with Voldemort. I liked the venom with which you wrote Regulus' response to all the information that Peter revealed. |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.13 - 10:21PM |
4: Chapter Three |
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| Very cool to have the inner voice be the werewolf, dictating things to Remus. I forgot to mention it in the last review, but it did make sense to have Severus kick him out--that is what I would have done in his position. So great the Prongs and Padfood supported the facts-of-life-according-to-Remus. But, Sirius, dear me, should not do this Polyjuice thing....Remus shouldn't betray his lover like that! But then, that makes it all the more interesting, right? |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.13 - 10:18PM |
3: Chapter Two |
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| I loved the lubrication charm! I know a few men that would love that sort of thing, ha ha. I admit that I don't read a lot of slash, much less NC-17 slash, but I like this chapter--you wrote it well! It felt right to me, very masculine, does that make sense?? I do think that Severus cuddling is a bit OOC, but I can go with that! Good work! |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.05.13 - 10:13PM |
2: Chapter One |
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| I am a horrible bitch for not getting back to your story until now, please forgive me! I just read through all you have posted thus far and like it very much. I thought using the werewolf ideas--picking up the scent, choosing the mate--was so cool. I think it makes sense that some of those qualities would carry over to the human form, even though JKR's not done anything like that. That's what fan fiction is for, though, exploring those ideas. I also am quite intrigued that you have Lestrange and Sirius' brother here. Though it makes me nervous! |
| redvelvetcanopy |
2005.04.20 - 09:13PM |
1: Dramatis Personae and Prologue |
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What a novel concept! I am new to this site, and am exploring a bit. I do want to read on. I like the descriptions of all the characters and the format of this!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm uploading the rest of the story now. Enjoy the site :) |
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