Reviews for Sing a Song of Hogwarts
Sniv |
2005.02.27 - 11:16AM |
1: Turn the Page |
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LOL @ the "green" review!!! Anyways I like the start - promising :) |
LariLee |
2005.02.26 - 02:22PM |
16: If Ye Love Me |
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It's definitely been a fun ride! I'm sorry the safety bars back up and we must disembark! Thank you for sharing! ~Lisa |
Vocalion |
2005.02.26 - 12:09PM |
16: If Ye Love Me |
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Hi, Pennfana! I think your ending was sweet and tender. Not overly fluffy. I prefer happiness to angst, so you've left me quite satisfied. The Codanna scene was very funny too! I enjoyed your story very much. |
HPFan |
2005.01.22 - 11:31PM |
15: Ne Me Perdas |
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beautifully written. loved it and cant wait for the next update.:)
Author's Response: That might be awhile...there's only one chapter left, and the whole story has actually been finished for over a year. Unfortunately, that chapter needs some fairly severe edits and I had to go on course overload for my last semester at University. Hopefully I'll have it ready and readable soon, though. =) |
LariLee |
2004.12.30 - 04:35AM |
15: Ne Me Perdas |
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Nice chapter and I'm sorry I didn't mention it before, but you do a great Lockhart! ~Lisa
Author's Response: Thanks--he's actually pretty fun to write, if only to make fun of. =) |
LariLee |
2004.12.30 - 04:11AM |
12: Say What You Want |
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The romance (or near miss) was fine. And anyone who quotes L.M.Montgomery and doesn't use the more famous Anne is quite okay in my books! Her Emily series was much better imho. ~Lisa
Author's Response: I agree about Anne and Emily; somehow I always identified a bit more with Emily. Of course, it's said that after the third Anne book was published, Montgomery was quite sick of Anne and frankly, I think it shows. |
Melvacaea |
2004.11.22 - 08:52AM |
14: Lacrimosa, dies illa |
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Excellent! This is a gripping story that keeps me on my toes.
Geillis seems to be a very explosive character...for me, those are the easiest to write.
Keep up the great work!
-Mel |
Vocalion |
2004.11.19 - 11:29PM |
14: Lacrimosa, dies illa |
Anonymous |
Glad to see you've posted a new chapter. I like the way your story is unfolding, and as always, your Author's Notes are entertaining. Can't wait to see how this all works itself out. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.11.19 - 03:19PM |
11: I Just Whisper Your Name |
Anonymous |
If I were to give advice it might be along the lines of more backstory. There's not much detail about Sinistra therefore you could make it up. Give her a first name and a body. Maybe introduce her earlier in the story. Why does she have a thing for Snape? Does she know he is a Death Eater? Why does she automatically believe Cordanna. The logical course of action would be for her to tell Dumbledore (that Geillis might be a deatheater). Not that characters in love often think logically. You may want to consider looking at the story more from Cordanna's point of view. She is definately an evil and fascinating character. Is there more to her life than revenge on Gellis? Granted these suggestion would alter the nature of your story and also require a lot of work to change. The story as you have it is good.
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed criticism--I love this sort of review and hardly ever get it at fanfiction.net (when I get reviews there at all, that is).
First of all--you'll be finding out more about Codanna eventually; I've kept her relatively in the dark for a reason. There's more to her life than just revenge, but at this point, she's more than a little insane. I can't say anything else, because it would give away the changes that I've made to the story from it's first incarnation on ff.net.
As for Sinistra--I thought I'd mentioned in a couple of places that for the purposes of my story, she's called Cassiopeia (after one of my favourite constellations, by the way). I'll see about adding some further details about her, but I haven't got a very good mental image of her at the moment. This bothers me, but there's not much that can be done otherwise.
By the way, I've actually been thinking of doing a companion piece to this story from Codanna's point of view--probably a one-shot, but still I'd like to explore what's left of her mind a bit more than I could in this story. Not sure where I'd post it, though. |
rambkowalczyk |
2004.11.19 - 02:51PM |
9: The Silence Is Broken...Sort Of |
Anonymous |
Yes Snape was out of character, but within the confines of your story he seems consistant. I like how you had Filch interrupt about the disturbance in the restricted section.
Author's Response: Perhaps he's consistent, but I still worry about the OOC-ness present in this chapter and the one before. Perhaps someday I'll find some way to make it not quite so bad.
As for Filch...well, I figured that I should try to introduce some element of the canon here, as the story takes place in the background of "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone". =) |
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