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Reviews for Being Bartleby

srl1717 2013.12.17 - 09:33PM 1: Chapter One Signed
This is a great story and you are a great writer. I hope you update soon.

EzriSakota 2013.02.14 - 09:54PM 1: Chapter One Signed
tthat was a fine piece of fanfictiion it made my search for a good sory feel complete

SataiDelenn 2012.12.30 - 03:04AM 1: Chapter One Signed
Of course criticising fanfiction (or any type of story, really) is easier than writing it. However, you have talent, and aside from some spelling errors (probably from typing too fast, and not checking things over properly before submitting the story) I really enjoyed reading it. I like the style of your writing for this story, and you've realistically captured the MC's mindset and attitude. I look forward to reading more of this.

fifiotoole 2012.11.28 - 05:47PM 1: Chapter One Signed
Promising start. You write very well. I hope you continue

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I do plan to continue, and let's both of us hope that subsequent chapters fulfill the promise of the first. :)

Eszther 2012.11.27 - 05:39PM 1: Chapter One Signed
This is a moving as well as disturbing story. I fear more than a third of women can relate to Ms. Scrivener. I think you portrayed the numbness following such a trauma very realisticly and I like your Snape in his early teaching days, I think you have him spot on. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind review! Yes, it's a disturbing subject, isn't it? And one that can be treated rather cavalierly. I tried not to do that here. There are a few more chapters to come, some lighter in tone and others darker, but there's a fairly happy ending, I think. And I'd be delighted if you'd like to stick around for it.

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