Reviews for Where Your Loyalties Lie
4everyourghoul |
2021.05.29 - 11:40PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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I think this is one of the best fanfics I’ve read EVER. And now I’m ripped in two that there is no more! 😭 |
4everyourghoul |
2021.05.29 - 11:38PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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I think this is one of the best fanfics I’ve read EVER. And now I’m ripped in two that there is no more! 😭 |
4everyourghoul |
2021.05.29 - 11:36PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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I think this is one of the best fanfics I’ve read EVER. And now I’m ripped in two that there is no more! 😭 |
4everyourghoul |
2021.05.29 - 12:11PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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I think this is one of the best fanfics I’ve read EVER. And now I’m ripped in two that there is no more! 😭 |
hot_stuff11 |
2013.12.15 - 05:46PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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OMG I just read through all this in one sitting and now I'm hopping mad because THERE'S NO MORE!!! *curls up and cries*
Author's Response: We are hoping to update soon. So glad you are enjoying it so far! |
Befindlichkeit |
2013.01.18 - 05:27PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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Please,please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! We are hopefully updating soon! It's been a bit hectic for the both of us recently... xx |
Agnus Castus |
2012.11.04 - 11:00AM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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What a nasty piece of work Barnabus Hamilton is; his inability to understand or take into account his daughter’s feelings is utterly horrific. I’m left wondering just what his deceased wife had to put up with – how she died – and how she knew to teach Isolde to protect herself *shudders*. Severus’s sarcastic disdain for Flank and Hamilton was a joy to read – you’ve captured him beautifully here – with condescension and derision in between the lines of every sentence he utters. I like the way you wove excerpts of Lily Evans in this chapter, and I also enjoyed your description of the Hog’s Head pub and the small yet significant interaction with Aberforth – I’m hoping the headmaster is doing what he can to protect Isolde from the evil clutches of Ichabod Flank. The scene in the dark dungeon classroom with the boomerang book was set up perfectly, and the tap-tap-tap of Snape’s arrival made *me* anxious, as did the absence of his satisfied smirk... The sexual tension has reached a glorious peak! I’m on the edge of my seat, here ;o)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely, detailed review. The tap-tap-tap was meant to be his thumb on the cover of the book but maybe I didn't explain that clearly enough. Need to work on that! Yes, we are both very excited about playing with the sexual tension between them! Yum yum yum! Thanks once again xx |
nagandsev |
2012.11.02 - 05:39PM |
17: Tempt Me into My Old Ways |
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The tension and further revelations of Barnabus Hamilton's depths of depravity and vileness are truly 'wonderful' and effective--great dynamics and depictions of the wily sordid antic of both him and Flank. Love it being juxtaposed with the 'innocent' sweetness of Marius offering her a token of solace with another copy of one of her favourite books--lovely to have a friend like that, and then to have the real Potions master catch them red-handedly--just what Isolde needed after the horrid day she's had:-(... Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Soooo glad you enjoyed it! Really appreciate your support xx |
nagandsev |
2012.10.30 - 06:41AM |
16: A Set of Suspicious Circumstances |
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Finally, Severus is loosening up a wee bit - lol! Glad he has developed an appreciation for erotica *whew* it'll do him good - lol! Love the informative scene with the triad and could feel Isolde's trepidation and fears, pondering Snape and Flank together--love the evil cliffie!!!xxx
Author's Response: Yes, we were rather cruel with that cliffhanger, weren't we? Things are not what they seem with Snape and Flank, though... xx |
nagandsev |
2012.10.30 - 06:33AM |
15: People Will Think You're Up to Something |
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Love the poignant glimpse into the background of Fitzwilliam Brinkley, lovely narrative--the atmosphere is so 'snugly' , I can quite imagine even Snape being seduced and lulled into sleep between the ambience and the content of the book and his thoughts of Isolde--lovely, yummy chapter! xxx
Author's Response: Yes, Brinkley is an intriguing soul! He will be reappearing again quite a few times, I should think! Thank you so much for your reviews/support xx |
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