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Reviews for Welkin in the Wizarding World

Jong_Kahn 2012.08.08 - 03:47AM 6: The Declaration Signed
She has great taste in music, I'll say that. "Tell Me Something Good" is one of the best seduction songs EVER. Glad they were able to say ILY to one another.

Author's Response: Snape's a very loyal guy to Lily's memory, but I could see him loving someone else as much as he did her. How cruel was that, that he didn't get the chance to in the real story? "Tell Me Something Good" has one line that I think is quite appropriate. 'What I got to give will sure 'nuff do you good...' I see Snape as a very passionate guy underneath it all, but quite conservative on the outside and he would definitely have to be goaded into action in the beginning.

Jong_Kahn 2012.08.08 - 03:20AM 4: The Yule Ball Signed
Hmm. I wonder if Lucius Malfoy is one of the 'things' Welkin is protected from? An excellent--and tasty--chapter! Thanks for a Yule Ball so much more fun than they're usually depicted!

Author's Response: I would imagine the Yule Ball is quite a spectacle, based on the decorations alone that are described in the book, but obviously I'm focused more on adult interactions than with the students. I've rushed their relationship I know, but I really can see him wanting to put his claim on her that early, having learned his lesson with losing out on Lily's affections through dawdling around and not declaring himself earlier. I really think he would be in that much of a rush. Yes, definitely keep an eye on Lucius, the bad guy I love to hate. I use him sporadically in the story. Thank you for the nice comments.

Jong_Kahn 2012.08.08 - 02:59AM 2: You Can't Go Home Again Signed
“You really are an egregiously pompous asshole,” and "Thank you, Prince Charming," made me laugh out loud. I think you've captured nicely how a modern woman would react to Professor Severus Snape if she met him in real life.

Author's Response: I envisioned Welkin as a very 'call em as she sees them' kind of a woman. Charming, but not inclined to hold back how she feels about something in most cases. Severus isn't exactly popular with the ladies in either of the worlds, to put it mildly. I'm always happy when I can make someone laugh with something I've written. Thanks for your comments.

Jong_Kahn 2012.08.08 - 02:48AM 1: The Unwelcome Arrival Signed
I'm getting shivers just hearing the snide tones of our favorite potions master already. Nice start!

Author's Response: Thank you! The set-up chapters for the circumstance were harder for me to write, except for that sneering condescension in his way of expressing himself. Thanks for taking the time to review!

royalbuff 2012.08.07 - 07:53AM 55: Rescue Me Signed
Oh yay! Damsel in distress rescued, dragon slayed.

Author's Response: I wanted to give Severus the opportunity to show what he's really made of, and put the spotlight back on him since Welkin's personality is now pretty firmly established, at least in my mind it is. So our Half-blood Prince gets to rescue his potty-mouthed princess and they lived happily ever after... Well, maybe not quite yet...

yick 2012.08.03 - 11:37PM 55: Rescue Me Signed
awesome chapter, welkin!!! loved it..so happy to see a new chapter again!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot to me, and is always very encouraging when you let me know you like the way a chapter turned out. Severus got to show what a hero he really is in this one by rescuing his fair potty-mouthed maiden. And he used that brilliant mind of his to do it!

yick 2012.07.26 - 10:19PM 54: Detention Times Five Signed
good chapter!! very..imaginative, as always!!! keep updating!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I thank you...and my somewhat warped imagination thanks you...:) I'll definitely keep updating. I know how I'm starting the next chapter, I just have to figure out where I want to go with it. I like for most chapters to be kind of a mini-story in themselves.

Merrylore8 2012.07.26 - 11:17AM 54: Detention Times Five Signed
Poor Severus - even jealous and resentful of himself at times! 'ully 'nape is absolutely adorable - even Harry can't resist him :D

Author's Response: Yes...jealous of his younger self with Welkin, but also still harboring resentment of his younger self for making the choices that he did, and causing all that past tragedy. Sully really must be adorable since he's upstaging the sex scenes on a regular basis...:D Thanks for your comments ML.

royalbuff 2012.07.26 - 04:25AM 54: Detention Times Five Signed
Lols. I luvs Ully Nape and his Nake.

Author's Response: He's pretty tough and determined, but willing to share. Snape would have had a cat fit if he'd seen him 'talkin' to Harry though. I enjoyed imagining him walking in unexpectedly and rushing over to push the pram out of Harry's vicinity. :D Sully just keeps intruding on my story, but in a happy way. I'm trying to imagine what his teenage version might be like. Thanks for your comment. I like knowing what people are responding to.

naturalgirl 2012.07.20 - 07:18PM 53: The Flobberworm and I Signed
Having lots if fun reading this. You have done a great job. When is the next chapter? Anxiously waiting :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're having fun reading because I'm definitely having fun writing. I'm starting on the next chapter tomorrow, which will be Welkin's detention that she insists on going through with. I think she'll be glad she did...;)

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