Reviews for Quantum Mechanics
NJ Dryad |
2012.10.14 - 10:05PM |
62: The Mechanics of a School Year |
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I love that Septima thinks the Durmstrang head is "too intense" for her taste. Um, what does she think Severus is? : ) Somebody really needs to hex YKW into a coma. How incredibly interfering and nosy to force his way into her appointments with Poppy and presume to tell her what to do with her child. >: -( |
nagandsev |
2011.12.04 - 06:56AM |
62: The Mechanics of a School Year |
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Nice flowing contrast and rhythm between the baby growing, Sev's nightmares and the Dark Mark's pain growing throughout the school year; Dumbles asking around about a foster family for the baby gives me goosepimples! Poor Septima!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think Septima's greatest worry about adoption is whether she can trust Severus to be both willing and able to overcome Dumbledore's determination at this point. Things are going well now, but she's been down that road a time or two. Thank you, again! |
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