Reviews for The Naughtiest Boy Helps a Friend
| Jacq_Black |
2020.11.26 - 07:31AM |
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| “Yes. And if you are unable to write the word ‘penis’, you probably should not be attempting to handle one.”
Oh, this was gold! Thank you for posting! |
| Jacq_Black |
2020.11.26 - 07:31AM |
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| “Yes. And if you are unable to write the word ‘penis’, you probably should not be attempting to handle one.”
Oh, this was gold! Thank you for posting! |
| tangerine dream |
2012.04.21 - 08:56AM |
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| Wonderful!! Clever, charming and very hot!! |
| SandyKinns |
2012.04.13 - 03:19AM |
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| You have a beautiful style. It makes me wonder if I could get into non-fiction? :) I loved this story, thank you! |
| marilyn |
2012.01.14 - 01:09PM |
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| It is nicely written, very funny,
but somehow I don't get them together in my head, though I like McGonagall very much. Just not as Snape's lover. |
| Jong_Kahn |
2011.06.15 - 09:02AM |
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Funny and tasty! I too have thought it would make for a logical hook-up, the two of them. Just one question about this sentence: "I found myself in need of a bit of pleasant Obliviation...". Seems to me if Severus is just talking about a nice diversion, "obliviation" should be with a small 'o'--unless you mean the spell Obliviate, which is capitalized. Do you mean he wants to be Obliviated (as in having his memory--of this?--taken away)? Except for that question, this story is perfect as it stands. Thanks for having written it--it's delightful!
Author's Response: Thanks! I did intend Severus to be referring to the spell; meaning that he wanted the memory of the class--not his tryst with Minerva--to be removed. Sorry that wasn't clear!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
| kittymipie |
2011.05.30 - 02:13PM |
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| hmmmmm...... very nice....... i have offten thought about what i would be like if the hooked up...... hmmmm |
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