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Reviews for Quantum Mechanics

WelkinCooper 2012.04.25 - 12:40PM 11: Mechanical Reflection Signed
I am so angry with your character at this point, for being so willing to go along with him, just to hang onto him. That means it's well written.

Author's Response: I'm convinced, from the teen girls I know and was myself, that this is typical of the age, especially if the girl is as inexperienced as this one is. It was interesting typing drafts of this while yelling, "Don't you see how stupid you're being?" LOL. Thank you for the review!

nagandsev 2011.03.27 - 02:02PM 11: Mechanical Reflection Signed
Well done - the realistic, sad tone - the utter selfishness on Severus' part, although he's just being honest from his pov.. but Septima... what is she do?

Author's Response: He thinks he's going to make this all work the way he wants, and Septima is foolish enough at this point to believe everything will work out anyway. It is a mess. Thank you for the review!

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