Reviews for Quantum Mechanics
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 12:12PM |
8: A Quantum of Doubt |
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I know she's in love, but that girl needs to stand up for herself. It looks like he's going down that familiar path of choosing his Death Eaters friends over her.
Author's Response: She's unutterably stupid here, isn't she? Thank you, again! |
hexgirl |
2011.03.18 - 06:36AM |
8: A Quantum of Doubt |
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Oh dear, I'm starting to worry for Septima, I hope Severus wakes up and smells the coffee.
Author's Response: Yes, she should have realized by now that what she expects and what he expects are so different, but she keeps assuming that he wants the same thing but in a different way. So she adjusts her view of things. Thank you for reviewing! |
nagandsev |
2011.03.13 - 02:29PM |
8: A Quantum of Doubt |
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Enjoy their busy, hectic turmoil and energy being depicted both privately and in the potion's lab... but there seems to be an uneven give and take - Severus seems to be getting much more out of their relationship, and Septima less... the last part with her being alone and lonely is spot on...
Author's Response: Yes, you're right. It's uneven, but neither really knows what to expect from something like this. She's always going to be a little lonely with things as they are, but she keeps hoping for more. Thank you for the review! |
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