Reviews for Quantum Mechanics
hexgirl |
2011.03.18 - 06:34AM |
6: Quantum of Romance |
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Poor Septima, she's looking for romance, but I'm not sure that she and Severus are on the page. Perhaps he will eventually be persuaded.
Author's Response: Yeah, they both have very different expectations at this point, and they don't realize that. At some point there will be trouble over it. Thank you for reviewing! |
hexgirl |
2011.03.18 - 06:30AM |
5: Mechanical Conversation |
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She's not backward in coming forward is she? But come on, Sev, you're really going to turn her down?
Author's Response: He knows what he thinks he wants, but somehow he can't resist Septima either. It's hard for him... because he makes it hard for himself. Thank you for the review! |
hexgirl |
2011.03.18 - 06:26AM |
4: Mechanical Courtship |
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Oh things are moving along, it looks as if Septima made the right decision when she took that potion.
Author's Response: Having asked for it, she couldn't *not* take it. She wants what goes with it, anyway. ;) Thank you for the review! |
tangerine dream |
2011.03.18 - 01:36AM |
10: A Quantum of News |
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Oh dear!! I feel for both of them!
Author's Response: I know what you mean. It's an awkward situation all around. Thank you for reviewing! |
Eleni |
2011.03.14 - 01:39PM |
3: Mechanics of Admiration |
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yes, go for it Severus - don't wait for Lily
Author's Response: If only he would! Well, we'll have to see how it goes. Thank you for the review! |
nagandsev |
2011.03.13 - 02:29PM |
8: A Quantum of Doubt |
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Enjoy their busy, hectic turmoil and energy being depicted both privately and in the potion's lab... but there seems to be an uneven give and take - Severus seems to be getting much more out of their relationship, and Septima less... the last part with her being alone and lonely is spot on...
Author's Response: Yes, you're right. It's uneven, but neither really knows what to expect from something like this. She's always going to be a little lonely with things as they are, but she keeps hoping for more. Thank you for the review! |
nagandsev |
2011.03.13 - 02:21PM |
10: A Quantum of News |
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Oh poor Septima - very clear depiction of this revelatory scene and their different reactions, and Septima's expectation and disappointment thereof... I won't fully cast judgement on Severus - will try to hold onto the cliff until the next chapter to see if he goes after her, or not... and if not, then I'll write a variety of unpleasant names to call him, young man or not (as he is so clearly depicted here)... well done! But again, poor Septima... but she couldn't help where her heart led her, numbers supporting her or not...
Author's Response: He's not particularly loveable here, is he? To be fair, he hasn't had time to really think about it yet. Maybe he won't be such a jerk after all. Thanks for the reviews! |
tangerine dream |
2011.03.10 - 04:24PM |
9: A Quantum of Merriment |
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What a foolish young man! He has it all and he doesn't even realise it!
Author's Response: He could be happy if he let himself, but he doesn't trust that it could be so easy and it's not quite what he thinks he wants. He's still just a boy in a lot of ways, though. Thank you for the review! |
tangerine dream |
2011.03.06 - 06:03PM |
7: Mechanical Morning |
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Finally caught up on this!! Great chapters!! I am glad they have gotten together, but I do hope Severus sees her as more than a short fling!
Author's Response: I had figured that this would be twelve chapters, tops, but I'm already up to twenty and the end is barely in sight! So I can say it's not a short fling, but Severus's view of the situation may be questionable. |
Sith Witch |
2011.03.01 - 06:48PM |
6: Quantum of Romance |
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Very sweet. Severus being inexperienced was new. Nice touch. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Somehow I think women like Septima would have been the exception in his life. He's only about 19, here, though, so maybe he's still learning. Thank you again for the review! |
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