Reviews for Quantum Mechanics
nagandsev |
2011.12.04 - 03:20PM |
65: The Mechanics of Facing Facts |
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Love this revelation scene! and the twists and premise of the story coming around full circle! Wonderful! xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! I was never sure exactly how or when we'd get to this point, but as the canon events unfolded, it just seemed as though this is how it would work out. When Hermione is upset and threatened is when Septima's maternal feeling would come closest to the surface, and an impatient Severus would finally say what he's been wanting to say all along. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. |
nagandsev |
2011.12.04 - 03:15PM |
64: A Quantum of Recall |
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Love the cliffhanger! And the recalling - poor Septima - what a strong, sensitive soul she is! xx
Author's Response: This is what Severus has been hoping to discover for a few years now, and he's having to gently nudge it out of her. I think she's fortunate that he's willing to work with the whole thing. They both have a vested interest in figuring it out. Thank you, again! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.04 - 07:04AM |
63: A Quantum of Truth |
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Wonderful chapter! Thank you for depicting them engaged in coital pleasures in mid-pregnancy - brava! really lovely work! But now, Septima's nightmares...? xx
Author's Response: It's a lot more work during pregnancy, but it can be pretty wonderful, I think. Septima's nightmare is her body telling her something her mind can't remember. Some of her greatest enemies are in her own head. Thank you, as always! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.04 - 06:56AM |
62: The Mechanics of a School Year |
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Nice flowing contrast and rhythm between the baby growing, Sev's nightmares and the Dark Mark's pain growing throughout the school year; Dumbles asking around about a foster family for the baby gives me goosepimples! Poor Septima!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think Septima's greatest worry about adoption is whether she can trust Severus to be both willing and able to overcome Dumbledore's determination at this point. Things are going well now, but she's been down that road a time or two. Thank you, again! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.03 - 10:16AM |
61: A Quantum of Warning |
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Glad that Septima and baby are unharmed! Whew! Quick thinking on everyone's part to get around Dumbles' suspicions! xx
Author's Response: LOL... subterfuge with Dumbledore is second nature to both Severus and Poppy; I think she almost enjoyed the double meaning behind her directions. Thank you! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.03 - 10:04AM |
60: A Quantum of Summertime |
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Great chapter! Love their time together the way it should have always been! Oh, how sinister with the DE drawing... how much did Sev tell Eileen! Love the portrayal of his response to their child growing & his appreciation for Sept's body carrying the life force within! xx
Author's Response: The Dark Mark is a major canon factor in upcoming events, so I couldn't ignore it. Meanwhile, Severus will probably ultimately tell Eileen everything he's figured out, in case it proves important. Thank you, again! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.03 - 09:56AM |
59: Family Mechanics |
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Oooo.. Eileen! What a great surprise! Love it that Septima loves Spinner's Inn and has more than a few ideas about how to make it cosier! xx
Author's Response: Septima sees Spinner's End as an extension of the Severus that she loves rather than as a dirty, run-down place. Thank you for the review! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.03 - 09:52AM |
58: The Mechanics of Adjusting Plans |
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Brava, Poppy! :-D Loved this! Glad their in caoots to throw the wool over old Dumbles eyes -at least for now! Really love Pomfrey's professionalism being highlighted! xx
Author's Response: Poppy's had dealings with Dumbledore in the past. I'm hoping to be able to work a little backstory on that into this. Thank you, again! |
nagandsev |
2011.12.03 - 09:33AM |
57: The Mechanics of Protection |
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Wonderful chapter! Great, profound last line with his realisation of the trust issues! xx
Author's Response: It's taken a while, but he's starting to understand that a fair amount of the difficulties between himself and Septima have been caused by outside influences. Thank you! |
Elaine Lahey |
2011.11.13 - 08:25PM |
63: A Quantum of Truth |
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I love this story so much! I actually like this better than the canon. (Rowling forgive me!) More please.
Author's Response: I think she left a lot out, particularly when it comes to what the adults were doing and thinking. Thank you so much; more is coming! |
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