Reviews for Quantum Mechanics
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 12:45PM |
12: Mechanical Failure |
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Lots and lots of friction, understandably so. Not exactly good for an expectant mother. Is she going into early labor?
Author's Response: As she will explain in a much later chapter, Septima still thinks they're just doing things a little out of order. She believes that it will all work out, despite Severus's behavior and her own art telling her better. Thank you, again! |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 12:40PM |
11: Mechanical Reflection |
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I am so angry with your character at this point, for being so willing to go along with him, just to hang onto him. That means it's well written.
Author's Response: I'm convinced, from the teen girls I know and was myself, that this is typical of the age, especially if the girl is as inexperienced as this one is. It was interesting typing drafts of this while yelling, "Don't you see how stupid you're being?" LOL. Thank you for the review! |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 12:31PM |
10: A Quantum of News |
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Oh dear...I hope she really didn't get pregnant on purpose, hoping for a better outcome. Not a good idea. I think he'd decide to do the honorable thing though.
Author's Response: No, they were being responsible; it really was just one of those things that can happen. He's going to try to have everything in a twisted sort of Slytherin idea of honor. Thank you, again! |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 12:20PM |
9: A Quantum of Merriment |
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Okay, I'm a little angry with him, but I have to remember that you don't choose who you love, and he can't really help being so besotted with Lily and he's known her a lot longer than Septima. I just have this feeling this won't end well. Maybe that's what you intend me to feel? I like the fact he did chose a gift for her that took some thought and effort from him.
Author's Response: I think you've got exactly the right sense of what's going on, here. She's got the typical teen girl hearts and flowers expectations while he's got his own agenda. Neither has the guts or whatever to say what's on their mind, so there's bound to be a major problem when push comes to shove. Thanks for all the lovely reviews! |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 12:12PM |
8: A Quantum of Doubt |
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I know she's in love, but that girl needs to stand up for herself. It looks like he's going down that familiar path of choosing his Death Eaters friends over her.
Author's Response: She's unutterably stupid here, isn't she? Thank you, again! |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 11:51AM |
7: Mechanical Morning |
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His resolve to make it a one night stand is weakening by the second. She's definitely got him, without really trying. He's going to need a lot more cigarettes.
Author's Response: He's never had anything like this happen to him before, so he's a bit of a fish out of water, but he's determined to stay unentangled. |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.25 - 10:44AM |
6: Quantum of Romance |
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I love the use of the description of being like the way her wand fits into her hand.
Poor Septima. She's so sweet and young and so naive about the difference between sex and romance. But at least she recognizes a good man when she sees one.
Author's Response: Thank you! You've hit on exactly the problem they're going to have, which is that she has unrealistic expectations. |
WelkinCooper |
2012.04.16 - 11:34PM |
3: Mechanics of Admiration |
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I like your character's innocence and hint of awkwardness in this chapter, despite her competence in her area of expertise.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Septima is very much in control of her numbers, but the rest of her life is a mystery for her. |
Elaine Lahey |
2012.04.12 - 06:20PM |
89: A Quantum of Compromise |
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"Let's do whatever it takes!" I volunteer to be with Severus, 24-7 if need be, LOL. I love this story. I get so mad at AD I could push him off the Astronomy Tower myself. Why does he hate Septima soooo much? Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think there's going to be a line forming behind Snape at the top of the tower, LOL. |
Elaine Lahey |
2012.03.26 - 07:38PM |
84: The Mechanics of Returning to Normal |
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I love this story! I cant believe that Dumbledore sent Dick over to rape Septima. I could AK him myself. Please post again soon. This is my favorite story.
Author's Response: I don't think this Dumbledore sees much value in women. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! More is coming, soon! |
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