Reviews for His First
notwolf |
2011.01.17 - 11:50AM |
8: 8: The First He Lost |
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Poor girl is getting in deeper and deeper. It seems unless she can escape from Bella before midnight, she's to be marked. Even she thinks she is becoming evil, I guess.
Severus was right about Lily not being forgiving, and maybe Charles and his friend still have a chance to be friends again--assuming she survives. Did the serpent stop clenching her wrist?
Author's Response: Remember that it is Halloween. Voldy will be a tad, um, busy that evening. Your last question, I'll answer in the next chapter. Thanks for reading, and my apologies for not having been able to lift the reading jinx on your story yet. |
MissMetal47 |
2011.01.14 - 05:02PM |
8: 8: The First He Lost |
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thanks for the chapter! i've been waiting eagerly for it, and now im super anticipating the next one :) i love your work :)
Author's Response: No pressure, eh? ;-) Next chapter is in the making. Love your screen name, btw. |
bibliomancer |
2011.01.13 - 11:21PM |
8: 8: The First He Lost |
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Quick thinking on Snape's part! But poor Nadezhda ... I hate to think what Bella has planned for her. Something tells me its not bunnies or puppies this time.
Author's Response: Kittens? Seriously, though, we know Bella. She's bat-shit-crazy. And Nadezhda is about to find out just that. Thanks for reading and leaving a note! Means a lot! |
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