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Reviews for His First

Rosewood 2010.12.19 - 12:09PM 3: 3: The First He Couldn’t Keep Safe Signed
Talk about one hell of a plot! It's actually surprising to see that Voldemort decided to postpone accepting Naddie into his ranks. Now Severus has to contend with Barty Jr. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response: That hell of a plot sure came to bite me in the you-know-what! But we're getting there. Slowly but surely, chapter 7 is taking form. Hope you'll like it once it's up.

hexgirl 2010.11.04 - 01:56PM 3: 3: The First He Couldn’t Keep Safe Signed
Excellent chapter. I am very worried for Nadezhda, what a hideous situation for her to be in. If I was her I would try to imagine that Bartemius Crouch Jr looked like David Tennant - a tall order I know but worth a shot! Trust Bellatrix to make a terrible situation a whole lot worse.

Author's Response: David Tennant, yeah, why not ;-) Not sure it will make her situation any more pleasurable, though. Glad you're liking this so far.

notwolf 2010.11.01 - 05:50PM 3: 3: The First He Couldn’t Keep Safe Signed
Wow, that was an intense chapter. And the end blew me away. I thought Severus would warn her about Barty later, but it's too late. He's getting engaged to her! I hope they don't force her to have sex with him. Poor girl...

Author's Response: Poor Severus doesn't get many chances in this story, neither does the girl. As for her having to have sex with Barty ... I wouldn't be so cruel, would I? Neither would Bellatrix. Or would we now?




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