Reviews for His First
MissMetal47 |
2011.01.14 - 05:02PM |
8: 8: The First He Lost |
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thanks for the chapter! i've been waiting eagerly for it, and now im super anticipating the next one :) i love your work :)
Author's Response: No pressure, eh? ;-) Next chapter is in the making. Love your screen name, btw. |
bibliomancer |
2011.01.13 - 11:21PM |
8: 8: The First He Lost |
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Quick thinking on Snape's part! But poor Nadezhda ... I hate to think what Bella has planned for her. Something tells me its not bunnies or puppies this time.
Author's Response: Kittens? Seriously, though, we know Bella. She's bat-shit-crazy. And Nadezhda is about to find out just that. Thanks for reading and leaving a note! Means a lot! |
notwolf |
2010.12.30 - 07:16PM |
7: 7: The First He Couldn’t Hide |
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Apparently the dark lord is not happy that Nadezna has been avoiding the manor. Now he's going to call her and Snape out. Poor thing. Should have just killed her dad from the off and been done with it. Then she wouldn't have to follow anyone because he wouldn't have taken her to Voldy.
Author's Response: Shoulda. Woulda. Didn't. Oh well, 12 more hours until The Most Tedious One will be gone. Keep your fingers crossed for Severus and Nadezhda. HAPPY NEW YEAR! |
MissMetal47 |
2010.12.28 - 10:55PM |
7: 7: The First He Couldn’t Hide |
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oh cliffhangers!
glad you added another chapter :)
but i think you should add another one very soon! haha :)
Author's Response: Doing what I can :-) Happy New Year to you! |
MissMetal47 |
2010.12.26 - 04:55PM |
6: 6: The First He Couldn’t Understand |
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I really love this story.
I hope you add a new chapter soon! :D
Author's Response: I really hope so, too. Stuck with the relatives until the New Year though, which has a tendency to kill the muse. But I'll try my best to give you a new chapter soon. /M |
notwolf |
2010.12.23 - 10:22AM |
6: 6: The First He Couldn’t Understand |
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Very smart girl, but like Severus said, one day she will have to cast the spells to prove to Voldemort what she can do. She is between a rock and a hard place. Maybe if Barty were to die, lol. But then she'd have to 'marry' another DE, a much worse one. How awful. Love how hard Snape is trying to help her.
Author's Response: Would never kill Barty. I kinda like him ;-) I promise that Voldy will show up soon, though. |
Jimena Graystone |
2010.12.19 - 10:27PM |
6: 6: The First He Couldn’t Understand |
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God, that was good! Poor Nadehzda. If I spelled that right from memory, I will be amazed. As it is, I'm sure I butchered it, so accept my apologies. I so like her. She is so smart. I hope that Snape can help her get out of this whole dreadful matter with the Dark Lord.
Author's Response: You know, I've added that name to my spell checker. "Note to self: Pick easier names for OCs." I'm glad you're enjoying this story. I'd love to write on the next chapter today, but, alas, my boss thinks I should go to work. Silly man. |
Rosewood |
2010.12.19 - 12:09PM |
3: 3: The First He Couldn’t Keep Safe |
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Talk about one hell of a plot! It's actually surprising to see that Voldemort decided to postpone accepting Naddie into his ranks. Now Severus has to contend with Barty Jr. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Author's Response: That hell of a plot sure came to bite me in the you-know-what! But we're getting there. Slowly but surely, chapter 7 is taking form. Hope you'll like it once it's up. |
Neko Mata |
2010.12.18 - 11:14AM |
1: 1: The First He Had to Protect |
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This seems to be a good start already, can´t wait to read how this will turn out! Very nice!
Author's Response: Hope you'll enjoy it. :-) |
bibliomancer |
2010.12.14 - 11:00PM |
6: 6: The First He Couldn’t Understand |
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Such a clever witch! I'm impressed with her performance. The bit about Snape and his herbal infusion made me sad for him though. Poor guy. =(
Author's Response: I often feel sad for poor Snape when he cannot sleep. (Note to self: be nicer to him.) Wishing you happy holidays and hope to see you again in January. |
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