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| morgaine_dulac | 2010.10.31 - 05:48AM | 5: Fairness | Signed |
| Lucius is nuts, charming the kid's appearance! Get some brains, man! Love your Dumbledore in this chapter. It's such a blow for a teacher/headmaster to realise that there is bullying going on under their very nose and they're unable to do anything. Author's Response: You're right, Lucius has gone way overboard with Damien. But he'll wise up. :P Although I think Dumbledore was not a very good Headmaster because of what he allowed to go on, I did try to give him the benefit of the doubt sometimes. | |||
| a1severuslives | 2010.07.20 - 08:52PM | 5: Fairness | Signed |
| Excellent. You have everyone down neat! So loved James and Sirius copping the charge for once. I love Narcissa, I would react the same way if my husband did what Lucius is doing. Your portrayal of the DE's is very believable. If they were all like Bella and Voldy, they would be infallible. Author's Response: Hi there! I always welcome new readers and reviewers, so thank you for reviewing! I thought it was about time James and Sirius were portrayed as the boys who could be cruel enough to do Levicorpus on Severus. Sirius never did feel sorry for how mean he was, so I imagine he had to be a horrid boy, lol. Have you read on Lumos my "The Beginnings of a Death Eater"? It shows mainly Lucius and Narcissa, but a lot of young Sirius and Severus. Narcissa has every right to feel like she does. The next chapter brings them back together. And I agree, if all the DEs had been like Voldy and Bella, God save the world! Luckily, all of them had their own agenda, and for most it didn't include wanton murder and such. | |||
| Rose of the West | 2010.07.19 - 10:30PM | 5: Fairness | Signed |
| It's nice to see this Dumbledore be a bit more even handed. I think Narcissa is on to something. Lucius is really in trouble. Author's Response: Next chapter is brighter for the Malfoys, not so much for Dumbledore. He is inconsistent, at best. | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2010.07.18 - 10:44PM | 5: Fairness | Signed |
| This one I liked, especially seeing the Marauders get what was coming to them, all four of them. I liked seeing Dumbledore work on the weakest link. Any man who would walk out on a pregnant wife had to be weak from the very beginning. I hope the spells Dumbledore teaches Severus to blend into the walls work for him. I don't like Damien at all. Does he have a better side, or is he the spawn of the devil like the kid in the movie 'The Omen'? Author's Response: Dumbles can be very manipulative, so it makes sense he'd work on the weak link. I hadn't thought about that part of Remus walking out on his wife, but I was thinking how he didn't have the balls to stop his friends from using Levicorpus on Severus in the yard. You'll see very soon what is up with Damien--he's not the kid from the Omen, haha. | |||
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