Reviews for Into the Fold
morgaine_dulac |
2010.05.21 - 02:47PM |
40: Death and the Death Eater |
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You painted a very powerful picture in this last scene, depicting Severus' pain in a way JKR never managed to. Thank you.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed my rendering of Severus's POV in this scene. |
Rose of the West |
2010.04.28 - 10:45PM |
40: Death and the Death Eater |
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You have him discover it from the newspaper, a very interesting way to do it. It's heartbreaking to watch him discover what happened, realize his part in it, and then sell the rest of his soul to the Great Manipulator.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was a challenging and rather sad chapter to write. |
a1severuslives |
2010.04.28 - 10:42PM |
40: Death and the Death Eater |
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I like the way V doesn't permit Snape to cast the Unforgiveables initially, it certainly leaves a chance for Snape to maintain some of his soul in tact. I realise most of D's part was direct from canon, but it was good to read a plumped out version of "that" night.
Author's Response: Thanks! The chapter was sort of a way of explaining that night to myself. |
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