Reviews for A Second Chance For Happiness
||2012.06.17 - 11:11PM
||23: Chapter 23 – Fallout From The Fall Out
|"Insufferable, speccy little four-eyed twits." You can really turn a phrase, you know that? I've never seen a more pithily accurate assessment the Potter men. |
Author's Response: *tips cap* I thank you!
||2012.06.17 - 11:01PM
||22: Chapter 22 - Facing The Truth
|Sigh. When will he learn? He just can't catch a break with those redheads; they're too volatile. He needs a nice blonde or brunette. |
Author's Response: Ah, but it's the volatility that draws him in... opposites attract and all that...
||2012.06.17 - 10:52PM
||21: Chapter 21 - Showdown At Godric's Hollow
|This is outstanding. I can definitely see them both acting like this. Harry has a depth and maturity in this scene that I've rarely seen anywhere. I wish canon had shown this side of him; he'd actually be an interesting character. |
Author's Response: Again, I humbly thank you for reading and reviewing.
||2012.06.17 - 10:32PM
||20: Chapter 20 – Back To Hogwarts
|Tsk, tsk. I thought Severus was smarter than that. Imitating Tom Riddle is never a good idea. He should have learned that decades ago. When Harry can see through your deception, it must be inferior. :D|
Author's Response: Hehe, well, Harry IS the head Auror. He must have learned something over the years and not got by on blind luck like he did at school ;)
||2012.06.17 - 10:18PM
||19: Chapter 19 - In Too Deep
|This is great. I love the delicate balance between the physical and emotional aspects of their relationship. I also really liked the sexual joke. |
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
||2012.06.17 - 10:13PM
||18: Chapter 18 – Harry’s Horror
|I fell sorry for Harry in this story. He never learned how to be a husband and father, but he seems to be doing a reasonably good job of it. If Ginny had problems with him, she needed to take that up with him, not look for consolation from another man. You never fix problems within a marriage by going outside it. |
Author's Response: Absolutely. For all their Gryffindor valour, they both lacked the courage to fix their marriage.
||2012.06.17 - 10:02PM
||17: Chapter 17 – Playing With Fire
|Ah, there's nothing like a nice PWP chapter. |
Author's Response: Well, life without lemons ain't worth living :)
||2012.06.17 - 09:57PM
||16: Chapter 16 – Like A Moth To A Flame
|Uh-oh. This is a bad idea. They're both too needy and vulnerable for this to work. Ginny needs to finish her marriage before beginning a romance with someone else. And Severus is running the risk of putting all his eggs in one red-headed basket again. |
Author's Response: The path of true love never did run smoothly (or something).
||2012.06.17 - 09:48PM
||15: Chapter 15 – A Game OF Two Halves
|Well, I admit I did not see that coming. Those Quills are even smarter than wizards themselves, if they can see through Polyjuice. That paper will provide great blackmail material, if Harry wants to use it. |
Author's Response: What will Harry do with the information, that's the thing.
||2012.06.17 - 09:35PM
||14: Chapter 14 – A False Start
|I am SO looking forward to seeing how Harry reacts to his wife having the hots for a hunky Potions Master. This is great!|
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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