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trebeh 2014.04.10 - 03:48PM 1: Signed
Hi I was wanting to know if you had continued this story somewhere els. It has so much potential that I would hate to see it canceled. Are you interested in a coauthor to bounce ideas off of? And if not can I adopt and continue this story?

Rose of the West 2010.04.15 - 09:53PM 1: Signed
I like the use of the flashback, there. I prefer to use italics for a flashback or to give a date, myself, but it was pretty easy to see when the flashback started and what the approximate date probably was. I like that Narcissa and Severus are forming a partnership. It seems to suit the pair more than a regular romance.

LadySeverus 2010.04.14 - 04:05PM 1: Signed
I do like a good Sev/Narcissa pairing. I'm interested to see where this goes.

zenobia 2010.04.09 - 11:58AM 1: Signed
Like the beginning of the story. Keep writing

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I appreciate the review. I'll have a new chapter up soon.

Rose of the West 2010.04.09 - 12:19AM 1: Signed
Hm, I wasn't expecting something like this. It will be interesting to see Narcissa wangle her way out of the geezer and into marriage with "Luis", clearly with Severus's help.

Author's Response: Yes, indeed! We mustn't have Narcissa marrying the geezer! I would be very interested to read what you think of future chapters. We both seem to have written some back-story on the Black sisters. I wrote these chapters back in 2008, but I'm surprised at some of the similarities we both have about these characters in our stories! Thank you very much for the review.

Rose of the West 2010.04.06 - 12:47PM 1: Signed
That's quite a little interlude! No wonder Narcissa felt comfortable asking him for a favor at the beginning of HBP.

Author's Response: That's exactly what I was thinking! It seemed as though they were very well-acquainted and that somehow Bellatrix didn't like that so much. Thanks so much for the review :D

scar2d2w 2010.04.03 - 06:19PM 1: Signed
great beginning. keep going please!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the beginning and hope I can keep up the momentum. :)

star_girl 2010.04.02 - 08:22AM 1: Signed
Great start! I like Severus / Narcissa as a pairing and I'm looking forward to where this goes.

Author's Response: I also like the Severus/Narcissa pairing. That scene where Narcissa begs Severus to protect Draco in Half-Blood Prince just oozes intimacy. I hope I can keep you interested with this next chapter :)




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