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trebeh |
2014.04.10 - 03:48PM |
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Hi I was wanting to know if you had continued this story somewhere els. It has so much potential that I would hate to see it canceled. Are you interested in a coauthor to bounce ideas off of? And if not can I adopt and continue this story? |
Rose of the West |
2010.04.15 - 09:53PM |
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I like the use of the flashback, there. I prefer to use italics for a flashback or to give a date, myself, but it was pretty easy to see when the flashback started and what the approximate date probably was. I like that Narcissa and Severus are forming a partnership. It seems to suit the pair more than a regular romance. |
LadySeverus |
2010.04.14 - 04:05PM |
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I do like a good Sev/Narcissa pairing. I'm interested to see where this goes. |
zenobia |
2010.04.09 - 11:58AM |
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Like the beginning of the story.
Keep writing
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I appreciate the review. I'll have a new chapter up soon. |
Rose of the West |
2010.04.09 - 12:19AM |
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Hm, I wasn't expecting something like this. It will be interesting to see Narcissa wangle her way out of the geezer and into marriage with "Luis", clearly with Severus's help.
Author's Response: Yes, indeed! We mustn't have Narcissa marrying the geezer! I would be very interested to read what you think of future chapters. We both seem to have written some back-story on the Black sisters. I wrote these chapters back in 2008, but I'm surprised at some of the similarities we both have about these characters in our stories! Thank you very much for the review. |
Rose of the West |
2010.04.06 - 12:47PM |
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That's quite a little interlude! No wonder Narcissa felt comfortable asking him for a favor at the beginning of HBP.
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was thinking! It seemed as though they were very well-acquainted and that somehow Bellatrix didn't like that so much. Thanks so much for the review :D |
scar2d2w |
2010.04.03 - 06:19PM |
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great beginning. keep going please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the beginning and hope I can keep up the momentum. :) |
star_girl |
2010.04.02 - 08:22AM |
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Great start! I like Severus / Narcissa as a pairing and I'm looking forward to where this goes.
Author's Response: I also like the Severus/Narcissa pairing. That scene where Narcissa begs Severus to protect Draco in Half-Blood Prince just oozes intimacy. I hope I can keep you interested with this next chapter :) |
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