Reviews for In His Name
Snapesbeatrice |
2010.04.11 - 05:49PM |
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The conversation and developing relationship between Minerva and the old Healer is intriguing. I'm looking forward to reading how they work together.
Author's Response: I believe they will prove to be a most formidable pair. |
Stefunny82 |
2010.04.09 - 11:44PM |
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Wow....AMAZING stuff as usual! I just can't believe it ended there! I am soooooooo ready to see what is going to happen next!
Author's Response: *Moira grins with glee* I do love leaving all of you eager for more !! |
The Gallant Gryffindor |
2010.04.08 - 09:25PM |
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I thought it was too good to be true when Chelsea called me and told me you updated!!! Hooray!!!! Wow those are some though misunderstandings Minerva and Gareth had to sort out and I am glad that they did because Severus is going to need them all united in order to help with with these massive hurdles he is going to have to face soon. I can't wait until he wakes up and they help him begin to heal. This is by far the best piece of fanfiction I have ever read!
Author's Response: Darlin' girl - your review comes at just the right time for me. It's wonderful to know the work is so appreciated. Thank you. |
Trickie Woo |
2010.04.08 - 12:21AM |
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Gareth had good reason for his anger, I'm glad he got the chance to express it before Minerva began telling him her reasons why. This is the best line in the chapter, and IMO, the best line in the story so far “Albus... Albus means to be the cloak and finally guard his dagger? Sweet Circe, keep us from the irony of that.” Gareth and Minerva have formed a parnership, will it be more than that.
Author's Response: Minerva will never abandon her love for Albus but she certainly has a different perspective now. And, indeed, it will be interesting to discover the path that Gareth and Minerva choose to travel. |
LChaim |
2010.04.07 - 07:56PM |
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Jubilation!!! You updated!!!! I checked on here by chance. I am having such a rotten day and this is the perfect pick me up!!!! As always, my friend, you amaze me with your imagery and poetry! This is just such a privilege to read! I can really understand both Gareth and Minerva's side of their arugment. Both have valid points and I am very happy that they were able to work it out. It's clear they both have Nerian's best interests at heart and he really needs them both! This is absolutely brilliant and I enjoyed every syllable! I can not wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: I am SO happy that today was the day you popped on to check - hope it did make your day much better! That was quite the verbal battle, wasn't it - but now the air is cleared and thank heaven, because there's much to be done!! |
rininjapan |
2010.04.06 - 03:50PM |
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I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story! Your writing flows so beautifully and the imagery is just a treasure to read. Thank you, and I hope to see more soon. (I hope he gets better soon too. =( )
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so happy you're still here. Wonderful to hear my story still can bewtich and ensnare (to borrow a phrase). Chapter 10 is in the works as we speak. Neirin will begin to be with us more now. |
Sev4ever |
2010.04.03 - 04:10PM |
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As always you amaze us! This was so well worth the wait and will really add to the story once they all band together to help Severus! I truly can not wait to read more of this amazing story!!!!!!
Author's Response: My humble thanks. Working on Chapter 10 as we speak - hoping to be able to post more promptly for a while.... thanks for being patient !! |
geomancer |
2010.04.02 - 10:19PM |
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I am always excited to see an addition to this story. I enjoyed the confrontation and Minerva's explanation for her actions. Cruel to be kind here makes so much sense and brings a further richness to the story.
Author's Response: Minerva is truly a lioness and has the courage to face the ugliness of battle. I do believe Severus would indeed expect no less of her. Thank you so very much for reviewing and for remaining eager for more!! |
Snapesbeatrice |
2010.04.01 - 11:41PM |
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Woot! An Easter present! I'm copying to Word now so I can read it over the weekend. Sooooo glad you're back!
Author's Response: Most happy to accomodate with a virtual solid chocolate bunny for your Easter basket. I shall eagerly await your comments - and a hearty Woot back at ya! Diving into Chapter 10 even now !! |
Rose of the West |
2010.03.30 - 06:19PM |
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Minerva's reasoning makes sense. I like the partnership that's developing between her and Gareth. Sharing a small meal and walk together, of course, are very good for binding friendships.
Author's Response: Honesty between them is going to be crticial if they are to succeed. And as Minerva said, magic, and friendship are often expressed through the smallest things. I'm so pleased you took a moment to review and that you are staying with the story. Thank you! |
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