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Herbologist 2010.04.08 - 06:44PM 2: Chapter 2 Signed
I love how their relationship is gently starting to blossom. And the thought of Severus underwear shopping made me smile! Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think they're both isolated from everyone else and they have a lot in common that will bring them together. I enjoyed the shopping trip, too. ;)

a1severuslives 2010.04.07 - 09:11PM 3: Chapter 3 Signed
Hi, I like the story. Sorry I haven't been reviewing, got logged out and couldn't get back in.

Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean about getting logged out. There are a few places where that causes me serious trouble!

hexgirl 2010.04.03 - 04:01AM 2: Chapter 2 Signed
Just had to add an extra comment here regarding their age difference, which I confess I hadn't thought about - but I must say that I like the idea of her being older than him, especially as we so often read him with a much younger woman. I am six years older than my husband, so I'm all for it. ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you, again! I think age can play a factor at some stages of life, but this age difference at this point in their lives is pretty small, especially given all they've been through. I'm actually ten months older than my husband and for ten months a year he reminds me far too often. I make up for it during the other two months. After 20 years, it's one of our little jokes that no one else gets.

Severus49 2010.04.02 - 03:03PM 2: Chapter 2 Signed
It's an interesting pairing. She - of course - would be older than he (Severus would be about 37 at this time.), especially if Tonks is expecting. Tonks would be AT LEAST 20, which would make her at the very least 38. Hence, she's older than him.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

Severus49 2010.04.02 - 03:03PM 2: Chapter 2 Signed
It's an interesting pairing. She - of course - would be older than he (Severus would be about 37 at this time.), especially if Tonks is expecting. Tonks would be AT LEAST 20, which would make her at the very least 38. Hence, she's older than him.

Author's Response: You're making the same observations I once did when I first read a story with the same pair. Based upon what I've seen in the HP Lexicon, she's either six or seven years older. I chose six for a reason that comes up later in the story. It never would have worked when they were younger, but at this age they have far more in common and, that age difference is not very big now, especially when we consider that witches and wizards in the canon can easily live well over a hundred years. Thus I figure he's 38 as this starts, she's 44 and Tonks is 24 or 25.

hexgirl 2010.03.31 - 04:19AM 2: Chapter 2 Signed
This is lovely, I'm enjoying the development immensely. I especially love the dialogue between Severus and Andromeda and find it so touching to see him crave her acceptance and affection. I am eager for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! The more I think about this pair, the more I think they have in common: both Slytherin, both straddling the two worlds and both leaning in the same direction.

hexgirl 2010.03.15 - 09:23AM 1: One Signed
I like the way you managed to get across the identity of the woman without actually naming her. As a pairing - why not? He's had the other Black sisters. I enjoyed this, it left unanswered questions - I love unanswered questions, they make you think.

Author's Response: Thank you! Usually her younger relative is paired with him. In the Marauders era, it's a bit odd, because she's older, but he's _twice_ as much older than the younger relative and in this time frame that sort of difference is inconsequential. I felt like there needed to be a little bit of a reveal in this. I don't know why I went with a plotline that goes back and forth, but it seemed to work in my mind. We'll see how well it works for the readers. Thanks, again!

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