Reviews for The Golden Moment
||2010.06.23 - 11:54PM
||5: Chapter 5
|This is a wonderful story. You are so good!|
Author's Response: I can't tell you how I appreciated watching you go through the story last night. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
||2010.06.23 - 11:40PM
||3: Chapter 3
|I love the slow and steady way your have Andromeda and Severus reach accord with one another. Both are making the best of a situation neither would have engineered themselves into, given the choice. I am really liking this story! Another "10" for you!|
Author's Response: Thank you! The original prompt was for a 1000 word sudden fiction type story, but it sort of got out of my control, LOL!
||2010.06.23 - 11:28PM
|Since I concentrate so much on Severus and the Golden Trio, I have to admit that the Blacks, Tonks and others fall in another mental 'tier' for me. I didn't quite remember the third Black sister within this chapter. It wasn't until the paragraph before you spilled the beans next chapter, that I realized it was Andromeda Tonks. (Only the paragraph before, but STILL before you actually let us know for sure who she was!) This is quite a promising story, and I'm glad it's completed!|
Author's Response: It's an odd duck of a pairing, but they have so many things in common... both raised with similar attitudes, yet both on the same side of the war I'm glad you found it intriguing enough to continue!
||2010.06.01 - 04:34PM
||11: Chapter 11
|I really enjoyed this chapter. Is it possible for another scene with either Harry or Molly? No idea what they would be doing. I just love the way no one believes anyone could possibly be close to Snape, let alone intimate with him.
I liked the flashback to the Black/Prince marriage, I was actually thinking the cad was going to be Prince!
Thanks again for the story.|
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Hmm... I should do something to sort of tie the Harry and Molly thing up. I'm glad you enjoyed this. It was kind of fun, inventing the previous Black/Prince marriage, creating characters completely. In my mind, Pheemy's brother was Phineas Nigellus's father.
||2010.05.21 - 09:18PM
||10: Chapter 10
|Wow...this is some story. I'm a bit lost for words actually. Excuse me while I go back and read it again....BRAVO|
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
||2010.05.20 - 04:38PM
||10: Chapter 10
|Thank you again. This was wonderful, sometimes I have to reread the time frames though.
The second last paragraph with Severus and Minerva back sparring was great.
The final paragraph where Severus confronts Lily and tells her what he(we all) thinks was exquisite! It was painful for what Lily did to him and sad the way he hung on, (of course AD would never let him forget either). |
Author's Response: Than you. I'm sorry that some of the time frames go back and forth so much. I have to admit that I'm learning/practicing this technique and in some places it doesn't come out quite as I had hoped. I felt like he needed to consciously say goodbye to Lily in this story. I'm glad so many have liked that bit of conversation. Thanks, again!
||2010.05.07 - 08:08PM
||8: Chapter 8
|I really liked the scene with Harry and Molly. Harry is so not going to be "buddies" with Snape. I really enjoyed A telling S he needs to give up on St. Lily.|
Author's Response: Thank you. I think Harry is willing to forgive and forget, but is only willing to go so far. The argument over Lily went pretty well until S turned the tables on A. I guess they have some things to work through...
||2010.05.01 - 08:09PM
||6: Chapter 6
|Lovely, but it makes me sad too.|
Author's Response: Thank you! There's not much to be happy about at that point in the canon. They're just going to have to hope.
||2010.04.25 - 05:29PM
||5: Chapter 5
|Soo typical of Severus to claim to be the only DeathEater on the planet to be unable/unsuitable to father a child.|
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, he's absolutely convinced... of course there is a reason he thinks that.
||2010.04.19 - 07:23AM
||4: Chapter 4
|Oh My! That's put the cat among the pigeons. How on earth are they going to work pregnancy into their tentative relationship? Surely the DL will allow them to marry now. I'm very glad Severus got his well-deservrd Order of Merlin first class. Look forward to more.|
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, there's a lot to work through in all of this. I do think the DL would let them marry. He does need future Death Eaters, since he's always killing the current ones. That honor marks a turning point for them.
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