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Reviews for A Nagini and Severus Tale

Agnus Castus 2016.01.01 - 11:17AM 21: Ophiuchus Ascending Signed
Vicarious traumatisation... Severus really got more than he bargained for whilst probing Nagini's mind! His confrontation with Rodolphus was deliciously cruel and satisfying to read. I also enjoyed your characterisation of Narcissa, she often struck me as quite perceptive and appeared to understand the value of unconditional love. Given the horrors of Nagini's recent experiences, Severus seems to have stepped up to the plate and developed further into the man we know from the original books. Very nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for continuing to read and the kind feedback. Absolutely feel the same way about Narcissa. So glad that events are coming across as intended--yes, will continue to explore and take him more into the man we know from the books, maybe with some embellishments;-) On another note, *wands up* to Alan Rickman... Thank you again for the encouragement, truly, deeply appreciate it!

Agnus Castus 2015.10.24 - 05:31PM 20: Something Lost, Something Found Signed
So pleased you've updated this story. Your characterisations continue to delight, and I look forward to the remaining journey.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the feedback, truly appreciate it! Glad the characterisations are coming across clear enough--things will now move along speedily to the end, working (always too slowly) on the final three chapters (maybe two if I can compact all the loose ends, but... We'll see), so a bit more of this particular journey;-) Thank you once again, truly, deeply grateful!

Agnus Castus 2015.10.03 - 03:41PM 19: Caught and Found Signed
Nagini's encounter with Voldemort was gripping! A good balance of shock, terror and suspense, and a taste of things to come. Poor Severus, trying to contain his emotions but struggling against the overwhelming onslaught... It's satisfying to experience his feelings in full force before he learns to discipline his mind. Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Dearest Agnus Castus, thank you for reading and the generous feedback, truly appreciate it! Yes, wanted to explore a it of Severus' emotions before he discipline's his mind to what seemingly is numbness to certain emotions later on, depriving himself... So happy that it came across as intended--thank you again!

Agnus Castus 2015.08.31 - 04:35PM 18: A Restitution of Sorts, A Runespoor and the Horklump Signed
Seems there's a few new chapters for me to read - I'll be catching up soon! I enjoyed your characterisation of Hagrid, and glad to be with the fearless Nagini leading Peter through the Forbidden Forest. Let's hope this special Horklump is good news for her and Severus :)

Author's Response: Dearest Agnus Castus, thank you so much for continuing to read and for the lovely feedback, truly appreciate it! Hagrid is always a special challenge but fun to write:-) Needed to have Peter and Nagini have some interaction while still at Hogwarts--thank you again for the generous interest, hope you are well *waving hello!*

roni0811 2015.07.09 - 06:57PM 19: Caught and Found Signed
hope nagini and peter is okay! update soon... love everyone's personalities...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the encouraging feedback--truly appreciate it! So happy that you find everyone engaging enough; thank you again for your feedback! Am working on the finishing the next chapter soon. More about the effects on Nagini and Peter in later chapters.

roni0811 2015.07.09 - 06:31PM 17: Horologium Ascending - Part Two Signed
sad that severus couldn't protected hiselve and nagai.. i figure know some spell...

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and the feedback--was trying to capture a younger Severus who hadn't become as powerful/masterful as he'd become as an adult, and also wanted to explore how unfair & cruel being outnumbered, bullied by the others could be... Thank you so much, truly appreciate your interest and impressions!<3

roni0811 2015.07.09 - 08:05AM 10: Hogwarts, Lovegood & Hope Signed
wonder what the evil the ring possessed!! great chapie..

Author's Response: Thank you so much--it is indeed an evil ring, a twisted symbol between Rodolphus, Lucius and others, more will be revealed and related back to it. Thank you again for reading and for all of your encouraging feedback, truly appreciate it and am so happy, thanks again!<3<3<3

roni0811 2014.04.06 - 10:31PM 1: A Turn of Events Signed
an interesting story!!update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for your kind feedback, truly appreciate it! I'm sorry it's been so long to respond... real life set me back a bit, but I'll be catching up on this story very soon. Thank you again!

Asteria 2014.02.08 - 10:38PM 18: A Restitution of Sorts, A Runespoor and the Horklump Signed
Please. please write more soon. I love this story so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the encouraging feedback--truly appreciate it! I'll be trying to finish the next chapter and submit & post soon. So happy that you're enjoying it--thank you again!

Anastasia Witchling 2013.07.30 - 04:41PM 18: A Restitution of Sorts, A Runespoor and the Horklump Signed
So far, I am enthralled and that is a good thing! Can't wait to read the rest...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and the lovely feedback--truly appreciate it! I'm working on getting the next chapter finished, trying to smoothe out points to start bringing the story full circle--thanks again!

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